|Reviews for Daria: College Pains|
| skyy chapter 5 . 1/31
Just an FYI, you stated you never went to college and it is very obvious by your writing that you have no idea what university culture is like or how actual college courses and a campus works. Please stick to either writing things you actually know or do much more research because your lack of understanding negatively effects your story and writing ability
| Kairan1979 chapter 7 . 2/24/2012
Jane suspects that Daria can't accept her relationship with Andrea, and Daria is just being Daria. I hope it gets better, because Daria/Jane friendship is too precious to destroy it because of Daria's stress and Jane's paranoia.
| James the Lesser chapter 2 . 1/5/2007
No, NOT Trent/Daria. The creators themselves said it would never be a Trent Daria, those two are to far apart. They may get along but dating is out.
Also, strangely, Glenn Eichler made this comment on Jane in an interview...
"Jane... well, she could have been sexually active. I wanted to concentrate on things other than romance in the show, so we didn't focus on it, but having sex would certainly have been in character for her. As for the gay thing, I honestly wasn't aware of that speculation when we wrote IIFY. And though I see Jane as straight or maybe "straight and curious," it's fine with me if the speculation continues"
| ayruh chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
Ooh Nice. I like it already...is it gonna be trent/daria? I would like that very much. The hugging doens't seem like daria and jane but the fi is good non the less. I'm going on to the next chappy! :D
| tehcrazykatlady chapter 10 . 12/19/2006
your series is coming along nicely.
love the characters you've created,
only problem i can see is that you seem to have a little trouble with the whole 'skaz goes around and gets into the drivers seat' as opposed to 'skaz went around' .. blah blah blah
it changes from present to past tence occasionally, that's all.
other than that, great writing and i'm looking forward to future updates!
| James the Lesser chapter 7 . 12/5/2006
Thanks Psychotol, I do read them over several times but I ahve the problem of "I know what happens, I wrote it. SKip to the next line." Thanks for reviewing, and am working on Chapter 8. I rely on spell check for most things but like you said to and too are both spelled write but if used wrong, bleh. Just get in the grove of things. WOuld you like to be a beta reader? Think you need a account(they are free) to send PM's to each other but if you want get an account and PM me.
| Psychotol chapter 7 . 12/5/2006
Jane's Paranoia and Daria's work ethic make such a sensitive composition, this is still going pretty well, but you seem to have speling erors popping and grammer up here and there ('to' where I think you meant 'too', 'talks' where I think you meant 'talked' and 'when Andrea comes out of the bathroom' where I think you meant 'until Andrea came out of the bathroom'), pain in the ass (as well I know from giving my own fics the fine tooth comb and still missing errors on the fifth or seventh time), but you might want to go through it all again.
Otherwise, it's nice.
| Psychotol chapter 4 . 11/30/2006
Looks like the start of a beautiful series.
| Lord Vukodlak chapter 1 . 11/16/2006
Great fic, I'm guessing that a friend read your fic and said it sounded like another fic?