Reviews for Till Debt Do Us Part
sunset oasis chapter 23 . 5/19/2016
Ah, sly Blaise ... XD
sunset oasis chapter 22 . 5/19/2016
Ah, Snarry actions! Cute XD
sunset oasis chapter 20 . 5/19/2016
I love that Draco is worried about Blaise
sunset oasis chapter 19 . 5/19/2016
Is Fudge helping Seamus ... damn ...
sunset oasis chapter 12 . 5/19/2016
Blaise is really nice to Draco! Love him : )
sunset oasis chapter 11 . 5/19/2016
Love Blaise/Draco! : )
sunset oasis chapter 5 . 5/19/2016
Sev is really, really nice : )

Poor Draco ... his life is hard
sunset oasis chapter 4 . 5/19/2016
Umbridge is a bitch ...

Blaise is a nice bloke, I like him : )
sunset oasis chapter 2 . 5/19/2016
The ministry is really awful! Severus is brilliant ... love him.
Sakura Snape-Malfoy chapter 26 . 3/3/2016
I hope that you did well during your chemotherapy treatments.

I hope that you view this as constructive criticism and not as a flame because I am meaning this as cc. This story as been really interesting to read but there are some places that are confusing. At the beginning Harry was a force to be reckoned with and now he seems like a pathetic little sex demon. Harry seemed to be sliding down hill after he kissed Severus in Dumbledore's office. Which, Tobias seemed to know a lot about Harry but not that he was raped before. I think that if he had of known that then he might not have been willing to push Harry and Severus into consummating their marriage that soon, especially with the way he reacted to Seamus almost raping Harry.

I wish that Lucius had of lived to be able to help bring down Fudge. Btw, how did Lucius decline in health that fast? I mean he was only in prison for what, 3-6 months, right? I mean it was less than a year. If Severus and Lucius were suck great friends then shouldn't they both know that the other wasn't truly on Voldie's side?

You have to main pairing as Harry/Severus but somewhere you seem to have slid this story into having Draco and Blaise as the main pairing.

On top of that I really do hope that you chemotherapy went well and that you'll be able to update soon. I would like to find out what Draco does to Fudge. Plus finding out what all Madam Bones finds out about what all Fudge has done to the Wizarding World. Somebody needs to bring his sorry ass down.
Sakura Snape-Malfoy chapter 25 . 3/3/2016
My question would have been was Lucius talking about Harry or Fudge.
Ariesp19 chapter 26 . 9/22/2015
I hope you decide to finish
rosebud90 chapter 26 . 8/10/2015
I hope u update again soon I like the story can't what till u update
ban-chan100 chapter 26 . 4/12/2015
Continueeeeeee great storys can't be left here
ZianaSue chapter 26 . 8/10/2014
Fudge rubs me wrong but otherwise I like the way the story is progressing... Keep going!
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