Reviews for A Thin Veneer supplements
PascalDragon chapter 15 . 8/24/2021
I know this wasn't updated in quite some time, but I hope there will be some further chapters to enrich what we get with ATV itself. Especially the side story of the telepaths as well as Khali and his students on Federation Earth. :)
kyoshi711 chapter 3 . 5/23/2018
Wonderful offshoot story. It flows like the original story. Well done!
majorshane chapter 2 . 10/24/2016
"We died?" Spock picked up. "Surely you mean they died?"

"Part of me also died that day, some might say the best part," she returned. "When you see all you know and love turn to ash why don't you see how it affects you."

Given the events of the Abrams-verse alternate timeline movie reboot and the destruction of Vulcan, we actually get to see how Spock would react in a fairly similar (though not identical) scenario. He still chooses to serve starfleet and make the Galaxy a better place.
Fionn the Otaku chapter 9 . 3/5/2016
The ironic thing about Doctor Khali's remarks about humans mixing so fully with other species is that there is no such thing as a "pure bred" human. All modern humans are the result of interbreeding with at least one or two other species such as Neanderthals.
skarosianlifeform chapter 14 . 6/10/2014
What I don't understand is : how did not the Fed sensors detect Turo as a Minbari ? Weren't the alterations just cosmetic ?
skarosianlifeform chapter 6 . 6/10/2014
So ironical that Clark's niece is a "partisan" of the UFOP (or at least, that she's not hostile and biaised against them), while her uncle was the biggest xenophobe.
mantan1701a chapter 3 . 3/1/2013
So, are we seeing Jha'Dur take advantage of Sarek's early stage Bendii Syndrome?
justjoe chapter 15 . 2/26/2012
Very original and intelligently written story. The way each society is described is fantastic. You have done a great job in describing the motivations of each character. Fantastic.
astrocitizen chapter 15 . 11/7/2011
I like this chapter and its address of potential post-honeymoon troubles between the federation and the EA. That being said, the bit at the end, supposedly an official report by either Sheridan & Co. or the Psi-Cops seems kind of garbled. Probably not the first to complain of that, but there it is, all the same.
Gogolu chapter 15 . 9/11/2011
Carycomic chapter 15 . 9/6/2011
Very intense chapter! Although, that Federation log entry, in the last few paragraphs, was a little jumbled-sounding.
Tiky3000 chapter 15 . 9/5/2011
The moment the war ends the Earth Alliance will known extreme civil unrest if not divulge in open civil war.
john777 chapter 15 . 9/4/2011
I like your stories, keep writing
ShadowCub chapter 15 . 9/4/2011
Two words to describe EA's coming headache: Political Asylum.

Like anyone except those with families would really want to go back to EA space, where they can like in a state like Russia in the 70's.
Carycomic chapter 14 . 6/3/2011
And, I don't need to be a telepath to know that Sinclair is right!

Good job, Al. Especially with the figurative egg you put on Khali's face (lol!).
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