Reviews for Fractured Sun
Mariel3 chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
I really liked this. It's dark, but psychologically it's totally intriguing. I can see some of the Adama/Kara thing because of Zak and because Kara is messed up - and Adama...well, he's Adama. I liked the subtle hints that there was caring there on his part, and want to think that he knew rejecting her would be worse than accepting what she wanted. They're both two very wounded people. Interesting.

The second part, with Helo, was beautifully written, as well. I was a little disappointed that she didn't at least attempt an answer at "Why him?" - that would have made for some interesting reading - but I expect it would also have led to a lot more writing...

In any event, I really enjoyed this. I love unexpected things, and this is one of them. Thanks for the thought-provoking read!
enlightenedkitty chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Frakking awesome. I love how she goes to him only when desperate.