Reviews for The Perfect Fit
concubine alia chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
beautifully done

i like it

perfect ending
spqtchick1216 chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
omg that was so0o0o cute! i love it! i think you should add another chapter to what happens when elphie takes Galinda to the dance maybe? well even if you dont it was great...gotta love gelphie fluff
whingingwhippets chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
I liked these as well especially for one reason or another, imagery, pathos, humor, all of the above.. :-)

"God bless insatiable curiosity."

"Galinda’s “project” looked more like a fashion apocalypse."

"Elphaba felt guilt-gradual and thick, like one of her father’s favorite wines, ease its way down her throat, intoxicating her with regret.:

"But as with the dolls of her youth, Elphaba still managed to find enchantment beyond the exhausted delicacy."

It wasn’t unusual that their lips met just then. It seemed a natural conclusion, in all honesty.

nice job, another chapter I hope?
MysticMeg chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
:) That made me smile on a horrible wet Monday morning.
ChocolatStar chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Aw bless, that was great.

The way you use words is really excellant - poetic even: "Their efforts translated into the frustrated orchestra of determination" - hah, its brilliant. Really great writing and a great little story. Me love the Elphie/Galinda fluff ) Hugs!