Reviews for The Mystery Island
JonFinallyBendsTheKnee chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
A great story. Very good.
giant-midget chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
Pretty good, really good in fact. I have to agree with the dude/ dude-et that didn't like how you said rex thing. Otherwise after you have all ? chapters done consider sending to publisher
AquafireAngel chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
This is really good. You definately use a lot of description in your writing. Your grammar is excellent and you really made me feel Jack's pain. It had a great ending, a fantastic cliff-hanger type. The only thing I didn't like was how you described the T-Rex-looking creatures you kept calling them the rex things. This part could have been better.

Overall, a good story but could have used a little more description on the T-Rex creatures.
LadyLuck22 chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
Not bad at all for your first! Great job, I liked it!