|Reviews for Something Changed|
| Sir Marrok's Wife chapter 14 . 2/1
Simply superb. I tip my hat.
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/2
That was a wonderful story. I simply love it! And your writing was amazing! Bravo!
| akasoeki chapter 14 . 10/13/2013
Oh my word. This was amazing to read! I don't usually read fanfiction that is based on novels, as I usually gravitate toward anime and movies, but I am really glad I did start reading this one. The plot was magnificent and very well thought out. I love how you used the narrative in the chapters.
I was very hard pressed to sleep last night, as I was only halfway though the story. Damn you and your beautiful writing! Please write more stories!
| DZAuthor AKA DZMom chapter 14 . 11/27/2012
Brilliant story. Bravissimo!
| DZAuthor AKA DZMom chapter 13 . 11/27/2012
This is quite moving:
"'You sacrificed vengeance and desire for mercy; a noble thing. Good Form, Father would call it.'
"Good Form. How those words sank into Hook's heart!"
| DZAuthor AKA DZMom chapter 7 . 11/27/2012
Bravo for using pulchritudinous in a fan fic. I'm enjoying the story. On to the next chapter.
| Mari Wollsch chapter 14 . 11/7/2012
| Olivia028 chapter 2 . 9/19/2012
ok, i just want to say... this is wonderful so far. i'm delighted at how you're mimicing the classic narative style of the original work. it's so much fun to read and i can't wait to continue.
also, bravo on managing the timing so well. too many neverland writers take way too long in the opening parts, spending neerly three chapters in london and in wendy's thoughts without even a hint of any james hook. but this progressed beautifully, and i admire you for that.
| Freyalyn chapter 14 . 5/27/2011
Very well written - the style doesn't seem forced at all. And I had a big grin when James and Wendy turned up on her parents' doorstep!
| notjustme22 chapter 14 . 4/9/2011
I stumbled over this story yesterday and really enjoyed reading it. It is well written with believable characters and - of course - a wonderful love-story. Thank you for sharing!
| rain chant chapter 14 . 2/22/2011
I just read this entire story in one go. I needed something like this to read; it's beautiful. Thank you.
| Royalraven007 chapter 14 . 11/28/2010
This is your first ever? Really? Surely you have had experience writing before? This story is amazing! I loved the writing style and how you kept them and the narrator in character through the entire story. This is by far one of the best written stories I have read. I would not be surprised to learn that you are an author of many published books. I throughly enjoyed the story and couldn't review earlier for I was too enthraled in the story. If you ever decide to write more stories I would be delighted to read them. :) Again good job!
ps are you british/an adult/an english major? You really do write in a very sophisticated manner
| Seychelles chapter 14 . 9/12/2010
I loved this story. I always had a bit of a soft spot for Capt. Hook as well and so this was a joy to read. I also enjoyed your narrative style, it was amusing and fun to read. Good work!
| Umino Akiko chapter 14 . 5/29/2010
*running up and down the hall screaming how much I love this story at the top of my lungs*
| Twelve Years in Azkaban chapter 14 . 5/25/2010
Wonderful, darling, genius girl.
This is, quite simply, the best thing I've ever read.