|Reviews for Power|
| Invader BeckyandClad chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
woah very good poem
| janedoe091170 chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Interesting poem. It's in poem format, at least, but it could almost be like a monologue from Raven's point of view. It's fairly simple, but I guess you sacrifice complication when it's all someone's words and thoughts you're writing.
I'd like to see this as a fic, actually, where you elaborated and didn't just have Raven's dialogue [or maybe her thoughts] but descriptions of what she's doing and what really happened also. Just a suggestion. Good work!
| Zarola chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Short but nice poem