|Reviews for So Much Closer|
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
WOW! That was unexpected but so totally fangirling worthy!Haha!
| j chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
I LOVE the way that you write dialouge! perfect! AND hot :)
| paintupurple chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Aw, they're getting all close and stuff! x3 Oh, Remus, build a bridge and get over The Nile already. YOU LUFF HIM.
| HarryPotterResidentEvilFan chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
xD! So all the banter was wonderful! Oh and the end gah! :D
| you'll.go.out.in.style chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
I absolutely ADORE Sirius's character :D I liked this chapter, it was funny, and cute, and generally awesome :) x
| muhaaauder chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Still brilliant! I love Sirius's talk of Remus in his jeans that lets James know that Remus is standing in the door.
I think all three are very in character (four, actually - Dumbledore too :D ), and Remus trying to avoid them would be something he would do (great detail that the Slytherins are scared). The only thing I'm missing a little from this fic is a bit of Peter.
It's great when Remus and the other two talk in the Common Room - after hearing that they aren't seen together in the Hall anymore, it was good to know that they do still speak to each other and that it's only temporary.
Very cute and tender scene when the pups are watching the stars. And Remus kissed him back - no denying it! Great!
Poor Sirius in the end, though.
| xrosiex chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
ooh, I don't know how Remus is not all over Sirius by now...thats some very strong willpower he's got there...
| xSadistxFujix chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
Exallent 3rd part and off to 4!
| broadwaybaby529 chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
WAH how could Remus NOT like Sirius, if i were him, oh if only...
Good story, you should finish/continue it...
| 5redroses chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
I particularly liked "the horizontal dance" and Sirius calling James "Jimbo", and yes, I know he did in the first chapter as well, but it only just occurred to me how much I like it. Also I love the irony: “Saying nothing is sometimes speaking volumes, Jimbo.”
James said nothing to that.
| Triizore chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Remus held his head in his heads and sighed.
don't you mean
Remus held his head in his hands and sighed.
| Equine chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
holy crap these are so good! and you did leave this one at a bit of a cliffie.
i would write a longer review but im so excited to get to the next part, i'd really rather not take the time. XP
| alli-sun chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Once again, it was the summary that really got me. This is a very nice oneshot on its own actually, because you know, I read this one before I read all the others, and I wasn't TOO confused, it was a nice little story all on its own. Really, really funny, I love it when Sirius talks aloud about his thoughts of Remus whenever Remus is about to enter. Typical him, oh, how we love Sirius.
"You just kissed me!"
"You stuck your tongue in my mouth!"
Oh, as if you didn't like it Remus. n-n
| Squibakou chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
| gossamernomore chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
WHAT? A story where Remus actually isn't the one madly in love with Sirius? It's amazing :) I applaud you, and I can't wait for the next part.