Reviews for Crimson
Dan Von Hinden chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Hello. I like this, I hope you might continue this one. Sorta confusing at first, but not too complicated. I do have a question or two. 1.) Why is it a nightmare for Ayane? Doesn't she hate Kasumi, or is that you prefer that she has mixed feeling for her half-sister? Ayane is my favorite DOA charactor, and whether she hates Kasumi or now isn't important because I have read fanfics that have Ayane and Kasumi end as friends again and sometimes those are my favorite fics to read. Anyway, I seriously hope you consider following up on it. Good luck!
l'ombre d'un doute chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
Unfortunately I don't have a lot of time, but I had to review.

For a rough draft it's beautifully 's so dark and wonderful. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Sorry for the short reveiw.

-l'ombre
Tsuyu no Inochi chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
Appropriate title, for the perfect scenario with a timely ending.

Ayane was dreaming; or was she?

Great mind-boggler!
yoyo chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
I'm kinda of confused?. Is this the only chapter, or is there more, because this made no sense to me. I don't man to flame or anything. It does seem interesting though