Okay, definetly not Katie. I feel bad now lol

For some reason I think it might have been Katie who killed them, and hear me out. Katie said Narcissa was always nice, but she might have just said that to make her seem like she cared, and maybe Oliver and Katie got into a fight or something, and she killed him. Now, I am not certain, but I think it might be a possibility.

I love this. The plot twist everything. Though this is 18, I would have said to delete the sexual things to bring in more views. Lowering it to 13 or 12. I do reviews only on the stories I think have been well written :) . Anyway this could become a book. Just delete the inappropriate parts for younger audience and it’s perfect.

okay

Not to be mean but definitely is different from defiantly, no offense

You are in for a big surprise my friend

Seeing as Iam a miniature Hermione ( no bragging intended) I guessed Draco but Snape... Nuh uh!

That chapter explained a lot and i am no longer dumbfounded. Good chapter by the way.

I do not agree that Harry deserved the smack. he had every right 1 because Malfoy aperated into their bedroom. And 2 because his girlfriend was sneaking around behind his back and keeping secrets with Harry Potter's lifelong enemy Draco Malfoy. But other than that the chapter was pretty good.

Disgusting details. But the rest is good.

When Ginny points to Oliver and is whispering to herself I'm just imagining a Jim-from-the-office-looks-at-camera moment and I laughed out loud.

:-)

So Good.
Can you do more sex scenes

A truly awesome finale! Great love, humour and stuff. Really enjoyed it. Good luck in writing more stories! Hope they're just as good as this one, if not better.

It is a rather smashing read, though the incorrect grammar can be confusing. I think the plot changes too suddenly... Harry is suddenly ashamed of himself all at once. But yeah, you did upload quite regularly. It's still a nice read.