|Reviews for Without Her!|
| Immortal Sailor Cosmos chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Your story, plot wise is interesting, but your grammar is orture and pain. Fataly wouded pain. My eyes burn with the agony! And Lily L Potter is Lily LUNA Potter, Harry's daughter, but his mother. I hope you realize that. Lily EVANS Potter is his mother. But it is interesting.
~Immortal Sailor Cosmos