Reviews for Forever
Jitter-Bug chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
It was a poem that described friendship well.

Keep up the great work.
FMA4EVER chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
omg! i'm tearing up! i love the way the poem flowed(something i have trouble with) and i love how you mentioned friends and if they last forever! bravo! love it!

God Bless and Merry Christmas!

in Christ,

Keth'edra chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
umm, the meters a little off. its more like a chant, or a mantra. No meter, no rhyme, but a good strong basis, and a nice idea.
little boy on her bike chapter 1 . 11/21/2006
excellent. short and sad. try making future poetry longer and more descriptive, but thiss is a fabulous start.