|Reviews for Kiss the Girl|
| deadly-bliss chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Hiroaki and Natsuko? Maybe it's just me ( and considering the reviews I've scanned, maybe it is. XD ) but I kept on zoning in on them and Taichi and Mimi, though I absolutely love both of them as couples.
| mirai3k chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
I actually, really, really, REALLY love the ambiguity.
and though it was random and all over the place, it felt real. so good job & thank you for this!
| DrippingInk chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
A failed relationship? In my opinion, I think you had Tai and Mimi in your head at the time, but I could be wrong. Anyway, I think that the writing was good, but isn't the rating (K) somewhat low when considering how many times the word "fuck" was used? Just a thought...
I really liked this. It was truly, truly perfect in every way imaginable. Good work!
| herheartbeat chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
i adore this.
you're writing style just gets better.
and this is indeed a unique way of writing.
| naruto4ever chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
That was a cute story. Haven't been on this site for a while, had to focus on my studies. I was reading your stories all day, you updated so much! D
| Unproper Grammar chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
When I first read this; I thought it was Michi. Maybe it's because that's what I'm used to seeing from you, but it could also be because that's my favourite. :)
But then I read the author's notes in City of Kings...and it totally made sense. It's just like Daisuke to ramble about nothing in particular (the mirror, loved that BTW). A wonderful piece indeed!
Keep up the ever amazing work!
| hello heartbreak chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
It would be lovely if it was a Michi! A great read.
| Crystal chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
Hey it's Crystal. I'm just going to review this before I go to bed. It was nice, not my favourite but I still like it. Was it a Michi? Please tell me it was a Michi! Lol I mean I'll pretend it is anyway but I always want to know what the author actually had in mind. :D
| lola chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
ite a taichu-mimi pairing of course
| Copper Hikari chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Perfect inner molologue. But the fact that you didn't list the pair strikes me as odd. I'm putting my bets that this is either matt & sora, tai & sora, or TK and kari from 02.
| Stained In Negativity chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Lovely. I really liked it. The randomness is what makes is good. Very cool one shot
Stained In Negativity
| BE4UTIFUL chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
random, yes. the best opening line though. immediately reminded me of the catcher in the rye. the whole mirror thing was my favourite part, made me laugh. very amusing to see his inner desperation slip out as he tries to put up a mask in front of her, although i kinda hoped he'd be able to hold it till the end.
hope you'll write more.
| Takerus Lost Angel chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Really like it! I found it very angsty and moving, very well written! I have a picture in my head of what couple it was, but i agree it can be anyone! Great work!
| Caitlin chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
good story. OMG but u really gotta update City of Kings! ahh i've been like waiting for EVER! lol. well update soon! (City of Kings...) lmao.
| BladeMasterAd chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Im thinking Tai and Mimi. Most of your stories lately are Michis, so i figured that whats you were going for. I do admit, it was pretty random though. Still, it was good. Keep up the good work. And start updating your other stories soon, lol.