|Reviews for Give In|
| SerenNoir chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I really liked this. I JUST got into Lost, so I'm way behind with the times. I like authors who don't try to change the way characters are already laid out, and you did a wonderful job at keeping Ben the manipulative character that he's portrayed as. I like the dynamic between he and Juliet.
| Sakura Katana chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
"Is if? You'd better go then. I won't have any Stephen King lovers in my home."
So... cute? Yes. Supercute.
| kiss my keister chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I loved this story!
| harknessfan chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Thank you - this story was truly a joy to read. You completely captured the voices of the characters and I felt so close to Juliette's struggle with herself. I could actually hear the actors that play these roles speak the lines in my head as I read this! It was refreshing and rewarding to read a great story that also has a distinct attention to detail. By this I am referring to your dedication to proper punctuation, grammar and spelling. What a joy this was to read! Thank you so much for sharing! Oh, and also thank you for somehow making it "okay" to find Ben attractive, despite or perhaps because of some of his nefarious qualities! :) Thank you again! If you ever need a proofreader, drop me a line - I'd be happy to help!
| shabaku chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Well, that was simply WOW! You kept them both perfectly in character and I could really simply see Ben looking at her with those pale eyes of his ;) Amazing story, strong lines, nice plot; great!
| 4815162342Lost chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
I really enjoyed this story! It was very well done. I like how Ben just knows that Juliet will come back and I liked how you added the bit about Stephen King novels.
| Shikabane-Mai chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Wow. I love your portrayal of the Ben/Juliet "relationship", especially the way you portrayed Ben. You showed us his manipulative and calculating side as the story develops, which is something I absolutely LOVE about him. And the ending? Awesome! :D
| rividori chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I really liked this, and how it ended. I think Ben's line of "We talked all afternoon. What more could you possibly have to say?" is very in character. I could imagine him saying that. hehe. Good job with this. :)
| elconejoblanco chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
wow, I didn't think I would like this ship but this was actually really well written. although the whole tickling thing was a *little* strange. nice job!
| dreadpiratejulie chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
This is fabulous! I love Ben and Juliet! Please, write more!)
| x Lost Hero x chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
wow. just, wow.
| Shiro Ryuu chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
*happy sigh* That was... heh heh heh. The best thing I've read by you so far? Yes; by a long shot. So much love. I'm now convinced that dialogue is your strong point (though it's all good), so I'm surprised that you didn't have more of it in those earlier ones - their initial conversation made me giggle :D Gosh, this was fun - humor and tension and tastefulness and ICness... I liked the line "She’d been married and divorced. She could take care of herself" a lot, because, considering how 'that' relationship went, such a thought should've set off some warning bells of its own _ I do believe I have to favorite this...
| death.by.college chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
well. i'm converted. o_o
translation: i loved this! ahah, maybe it's just my super bad weakness for UST, but their cute, teasing, very in-character interaction made me smile like this big. and ... no, of course it wasn't just my weakness... like Juliet here, I'm just being defiant. *goes down with the ship* D: !
awesome job. 3
| lishaestes chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Loved it! You did a great job with both of these characters and the play between them. I would love to read more!
| Drowned Island Goddess chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
I love this story! Hope you write more Ben fics.