Reviews for Lilies
Captain Wolf chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
I think I'm adopting a knack for your style of writing. It's short sweet, and it's generally easy to comment on.

This story was so sad. At first I thought it was an OC as a narrator, but after the mention of Brock I figured it was Ash. This was sad, but beautifully written. Nice work.
The Ryuu Victoire Tea Party chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
This one is a continuation of that other one you did, when he got the call from his mom, right?

Sad, but insightful. I like it very much, though the end brings me to tears. I love the details in his speech, the subtle hints about Misty and him speaking about his life...

Anyways. Good fic.


Kawaii Kyuubi Kitsune chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
See you are back to writting these deep meaningful pokemon fics. It's lovely to read, a bit on the depressing side but your best fics always are.
Chibi Tetra chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
Very beautiful.. My heart sunk at the end... that's a good thing :D

You definately have mad writing skills,so, continue writing more stories to add to your collection.