|Reviews for Closer|
| xXshiyunaXx chapter 4 . 8/21/2011
Tards like the fake Falcon Strife below really need to be shot and the remains incinerated. The world's fucked up enough without dumbshits like them.
As for the story, will this be updated ever? I liked the idea, but it seems to have been abandonded.
| Ruon jian chapter 4 . 6/5/2011
I love the stories of yours that i have read and this is my favorite of all. i love the way you portray the characters and how they are in roles i could see them in like confidant manta and guilt ridden seductress tamao.
| one guy chapter 4 . 7/12/2008
That was touching.
| Falcon Strife chapter 4 . 4/5/2008
I'D LIKE TO APPOLIGIZE TO MY READERS FOR WRITING SUCH A SHITTY PIECE OF SHIT SUCH AS THIS.
| The last Demonic warrior chapter 4 . 2/27/2008
it was ok but when will manta get a girlfriend eh? or is tamao the perfect girl for him ;) plz up-date soon
| Setsumi-san chapter 4 . 2/18/2008
Aww, I kind of feel bad for Tamao and Ryu because I think he wouldn't want to sleep with someone so ladylike. Still,as you wrote, she WOULDN'T be a girl forever. I wonder if this'll have a happy ending given the circumstances of her first time. Don't leave me in suspense, Falcon-chan!
| Animemusic16 chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
if shes pregnat i'm gonna faint! XD
| deux-michelle chapter 3 . 9/13/2007
So far...this story really doesn't make sense.
But that's probably just me, I'm sure this makes sense to you.
I'm kinda dizzy, cuz you're jumping around with all your ideas and I'm trying really hard to follow them...Oh, and it isn't Too-san, it's otou-san.
I wouldn't peg Tamao as the kind of girl to go behind her boyfriend's back with another guy...
| D chapter 3 . 4/9/2007
Hmm... I like it. It has a good plot and isn't very rushed. In short IT'S GOD SMACKINGLY GLORIOUS!
| d chapter 3 . 3/9/2007
I really enjoyed this story. The emotions are clear and it is kind of intruiging. But what's most important, it was touching. I wish I could see an another chapter.
| Rabid Fangirl21 chapter 3 . 1/9/2007
really good story! please continue with it!
| Lady Anaia Lionel chapter 3 . 12/4/2006
Aww, this chapter was rather cute! Manta taking Tamao out to eat to cheer her up and such.
I really like it! It's awesome.
| OhSoSingle chapter 3 . 11/30/2006
That was okay... but nothing really happened. Make the next one a little more interesting, like, a little Hao Tamao. Good chap though!
| Setsumi-san chapter 3 . 11/30/2006
Hm...this chapter was okay, but not very exciting. I couldn't really see what the conflict was.
| Setsumi-san chapter 2 . 11/27/2006
(frowns) Geez, Horo and Ren are being real buttpipes. Have Hao and Tamao been a couple in this story? That complicates things even more. I look forward to chapter three, Miss Falcon.