Reviews for Betrayal
Guest chapter 9 . 7/7/2012
This story was not good, it really sucked
Mairi chapter 7 . 6/16/2009
I'm sorry to review this so long after it was interesting, but I wanted to mention that the plot elements here are interesting. The grammar could use some work, though.
Sheyla chapter 9 . 12/20/2008
great concept, though i felt a little let down at the end... was upset about Rameses.

I think that the story is ripe to be completely fleshed out It has great potential and I think that this will come as you mature.

I tell ya it gave me a few Ideas for stories and that is always awesome in my book.
Raverine-1013 chapter 9 . 9/20/2007
Very good I liked it a real twist at the end..

one thing though sometimes it sounded too much like modern day unless its supposed to be modern day?
Satan's Baby chapter 9 . 1/27/2007
so sad but good
aresgirl chapter 1 . 12/28/2006