Reviews for Two Life Times
Qween o shadows chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
nicely done minor speeling mistakes but it realy good i like the plot :)
zzzoo99 chapter 2 . 5/5/2011
dangerousgreen chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
you know what i like this story and you know what now im sad cause you haven't updated in like three years which means you probably wont continue T_T
lilk chapter 2 . 2/19/2007
that was a good story but for some reason i think somethings missing oh ya the ending
my gaurdian HaruHara chapter 2 . 12/30/2006
this story looks like it will be good and a lot of fun.

Draken in a strip joint is so funny(will nipple it. HaHa it mad me giggle
MaliciousMortal chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
This is a promising story. However, it would do you well to brush up on your spelling a bit, i.e. laser, not lazar. That's about all for now, I suppose...
dratsum-lee chapter 2 . 11/27/2006
I like it! so far you have all the good makings of a great story! Keep up the good work!
Xxkrazi3xlov3xX chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
Awe that was short! But seems like an interesting story. Hope u update son *;;
creativetoo chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
This looks like a good beginning.

Can't wait to see where it's going.