Reviews for The Dance
ArcherHawkeye chapter 5 . 11/14/2012
Laughter, crying, squealing and more laughter. I'm usually not a fan of this pair, but dear gods, you did it justice enough for me to love it. xDD
Client 91802 chapter 5 . 6/24/2009
Well, what can I say? Extremely well done! -claps-

At first, it seemed like a kind of emotionless smut fic, but the smut was really good, so I hung around, and then there was the fluffy soppy goodness! Love it!

Rude and Reno are so sweet. And a little naughty, haha.

Fabulous work! Thankyou! XD
The Well Loved Stray chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
-fangirl squeal- WOO! Amazing-ness, that's all I can say. Besides INcredibly sexy! XD Lol

Arcadian Dreamer chapter 5 . 4/14/2009
Hear hear! Very well done!
Mistress of Solitude chapter 5 . 1/28/2009
Oh Damn that was beautiful and freaking cute i loved the last chapter and 3rd also the 4th but your story really is beautifully amazing
reno-xxxXXXxxx chapter 5 . 1/22/2009
Oh GOD, you don't even know how much I love this. The best thing I've ever read for my favorite pairing! I don't know how you managed to make a five chapter story, filled with 98% sex, and not make it OTT, but you did it FANTASTICALLY! It has everything I love most, not just the smut, but the sweetness, the little sad bit when Reno cries, then a happy ending! Really cheered me up so thanks so much for writing it!
RinKashikiku chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
I absolutely love this story. It is, literally, the best yaoi I have ever read, and I have read quite a bit. I love how their relationship goes from pretty much uncaring, on the outside at least, to an utterly beautiful love. I just sat there smiling for a bit after I finished, and then burst into happy tears. I also like how slow and smooth the pace was. I can't stand when a good story is rushed. The pace was perfect. You took the time to describe every detail, and that is awesome. Another thing I liked is that they were both always in character. Never did I feel like they were acting out of character. The ending was very fulfilling, and it didn't leave you hanging like a lot of other stories do. Overall, this story is simply amazing, and I commend you for making such an awesome story. Please forgive the long and random review. Keep up the good work! .
yumie-darkness123 chapter 5 . 2/15/2008
i loved this it was hot, and sad, and sweet.


very good job
spopococ chapter 5 . 1/5/2008

hahaha, sorry random burst of affection, but this is just all together beautiful.

the transgression from Hot and sexy to deep and meaningful was just perfect, and the characterization was so well done that by the time I finished reading, I was nearly crying. I don't think I've ever had that happen from a story before. O.o

You have an amazing talent, keep working on it, and i'm sure the General public will love you for it. D
WithMyMadHatterHat chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
i love this story!

it's very well written

during the whole first part i'm like

"rude does not take it! he gives it!"

and once he said it i felt better XD

i always like stories that have a good plot

with the sex advancing the story, so i liked this a lot
Dark Man's Girl chapter 3 . 9/3/2007
I really love your style of writing. The use of 1st person makes this peice more than smut. I really love how you incorperate Rude's real love for Reno into his lust. Once again, adding to the value of the story. There are a few things, however, that I think you could improve upon. First of all, you use the phrases, "could of" and "would of" in your writing. Even though, that's how we talk, it's not gramatically correct. The correct phrases are "could have" and "would have". Another thing is, that it may be more effective to use quotes than saying things like " He stands and asks me if I've been a good TURK lately." Well that's my two sense and I'll continue reading with fervor!

Happy Writing

Vaoni chapter 5 . 8/18/2007
I just had an eyegasm...

yaoilover93 chapter 5 . 7/29/2007
OMG *faints then wakes up* i love u, u rock greatest story ever
Beyond-Society chapter 5 . 7/18/2007
This story is amazing. Plain and simple. Intensely emotional and erotic, and written in such a way that even the dirtiest scenes couldn't seem smutty if you tried. This is a work of art.
Violet's Veil chapter 5 . 6/25/2007
The Goodwitch felt bad for reading this. The Goodwitch felt naughty. The Goodwitch did not feel like being a Goodwitch. But that ending totally made up for it! It was so...sweet so!..woman! That was so ..nice..I just wish..*blushes from embrassment because goodwitches are supposed to be good* Rude would have at least got to be dominant at least once!

Nice writing. Nice ending. That shower thing was hilarious! Still can't believe I read this _

I never would have suspected Tseng and Shinra O.o well nice job.

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