Reviews for The Beat of the Rain
Gravitation fan chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I loved it. You should more and make it longer
MarcoAce chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
aw, cute story :) good job!
Eternal Dumas chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
I agree with you; Ace and Luffy together as brothers (especially when they were young) is so cute! x3
roo17 chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
So cute...
Perpetual Concern chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Hi!

How cute, I love AcexLuffy brotherly fluff. The only thing that I dislike is when they're a couple. I'm not a fan of that. But since this was just brother-ship, I didn't mind reading this. In fact, I loved it!

XxStrawberryKittyxX
onepiece fanatic chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
Cute! I liked it!
MKLlim chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Aw! Man, if I had a brother like Luffy, I'd be so much more mature... although that might not be a good thing.. If I had little brothers like Ace and Luffy, I'd just be a bit cuckoo. But that wouldn't change much...

Anyway, I saw in your review that you had written something with Ace and I was like, WHERE? So I came to look at it... wow I didn't notice this before.

IT'S SO CUTE! It makes me want to have a little brother. Seriously. ... Mom-? *gets ignored* .. never mind.
Pirate-ish chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
aw this story is so cute.
Clarobell chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
That was so sweet and lovely. There really aren't enough Ace and Luffy brother fics out there! This one was great! Well done!
VanillaSpiders chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
Short, sweet and to the point! Just how a 'LuffyAce Brother-ship' should be!

Blaze, even if that ISN"T a word, at least you know you won't be the only one using it.

Nice job!

Signed R.H.
Just another fan chapter 1 . 11/24/2006
I really liked this fanfic! Nice job!
Straw-hat-Writer chapter 1 . 11/24/2006
Oh the cuteness I love this. I can really see this happening! XD Fav.
HubiKoshi chapter 1 . 11/24/2006
It's not easy to me to believe that Luffy is afraid of something (exept his Grandfather and Smoker) but this is a FanFic so everything could happen.

I really like this one it's so... Cute. Scared Luffy seeking shelter in his Onii-chans arms. Really Cute :-]

This is just a addon of Japanese-Words-Freak but you could use Ototo (younger brother) instead of bro