Reviews for Why I Stay Inside
Exploading albino potato chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
aww poor wittle Near. bad mello, BAD!
It's An Elaborate Ruse chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I loved this story! They were in character to me, and you put in awesome details!
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
What a sad story. You did a great job writing it. In regards to your end author's note, the title is great.

This is very in character. Mello is a mean child so he would pretend to be Near's friend just for a chance to humiliate him. The way he went about pushing Near is very believable. Also good work with having Near want to hide the fact that he's hurt and embarrassed from everyone, especially Mello.

Nice job with showing that Mello feels somewhat guilty afterwards. The bit about Near wanting to evoke guilt from the rest of the kids is nicely done.

Poor Near, nice job with displaying the sadness in this fic. Good work with writing this story.
darkwish3 chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
thank you for this story, i liked it
X chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Poor Near...

But yes, I can definatly see Mello doing that.

I liked this fic, even though it was sad.
HeartBreAk Lily chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Aw poor Near D

When I was little people always bullied me...

Mello is a meanie face!
FrigidSnow chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
It was awesome. And don't worry... they weren't OOC. They were perfect.
Yuki neko Kira chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Aw! Poor Near! :glomps Near and throws Mello out the window:
NoOneShallKnow chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
*kicks Mello over and over and over*

Stupid Meanie Pants! *glares and walks away from him*

Ish Good, But Sad D:
VictorianLegend07 chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
*claps* This is my first M/N fic read and I'm glad that it's good _
Utsukushi-Mayonaka chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
-twitch- That was pretty cruel of Mello. I'm not going to say this is not something he would do because even though the percentage is low, he might pull a prank like this or worse.

;_; -hugs and gives Near a ton of ice cream with cookie bits in them- omg...
HeronsStorm chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
Actualy, Mello and Near seemed very IC. I like the story, sad but well written. Poor Near /huggles Near plushie/
Avacados are evil chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Aw Near... (bonecrushinghg) Poor guy. Mello you ass. :p
prettykittydarling chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
really well-written, i felt so bad for near cuase i know what its like when someone yu like humiliates you. it sucks
rubbersoul1967 chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
;-; Poor Near. I hate seeing him so sad. Sequel please?
28 | Page 1 2 Next »