|Reviews for The Edge of Our Dreams|
| trecebo chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Interesting premise. However, the story was basically retold adding Monica to the mix. I think if you go the way of adding Tess, you will lose sight of whatever end you are meaning to reach (HA! PUN!) Heck, I'm not sure of where you are going.
Tell us a story fleshing out more of the reasoning behind the war, tell us more about the sister knowing and her powers, or tell us something new altogether. You have a good foundation, use it to move your idea along...