Reviews for The Misadventures of the Brothers D
Damn Update Them chapter 5 . 7/2/2014
Please update your One Piece fanfics!
xxXxx chapter 5 . 4/11/2014
Ahahahahahaha! XD baka Shanks...
Gcatthewonderful chapter 5 . 11/12/2012
lol shanks failed,and luffy needs to fish better...
Gcatthewonderful chapter 3 . 11/12/2012
Gcatthewonderful chapter 2 . 11/12/2012
Loveless Butterfly66 chapter 5 . 11/13/2011
Can't wait for the next chapter. This is hilarious and keeps me laughing. The panicky Shanks was just great and very amusing cause you never really see Shanks that way. _
Elthia chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
I like your ideas of Ace and Luffy's past! But the chronological order is a bit messed up... I think Luffy is born in Fuschia village? And then he meets Shanks, and Shanks give him the hat, and then Garp sends him to Dadan's where he meets Ace and Sabo...
WolfyMcClowd chapter 5 . 4/8/2010
This is awesome! Please continuee
The Dark Side Has Yaoi chapter 5 . 2/5/2010
1337kitsune chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
HAHAHAHA! For your very first fic this is amazingly well done! I loved the first chap, I've read this but wanted to comment on every chap as per my promise in one of my comments hehe...Anyway love how Ace is so protective of Luffy, and you kept the narcolyptic fits well done hehe. I also love the end and yes...someone should really call child services on Garp, or else this may end badly ;

I'm gonna go to sleep since it's midnight, but tomorrow, and over the next week, I'm gonna keep spamming your inbox with comments till you come back! I wanna read your stuff again, on deviantart too I have username if you come back on that


So yeah...please come back soon!
OPFAN chapter 5 . 2/12/2009
so CuTE!

update soon! XD
Shiro-Kitsune8 chapter 5 . 11/12/2008

Shanks thinks he killed him! XD

Please update soon! I wanna know what happens!
roo17 chapter 5 . 9/27/2008
Please write another chapter! It's so good! The end of chp. 5 was hilarious! "OH MY GOD I KILLED HIM!" LOL!
Dark Angel215 chapter 5 . 9/24/2008
Wicked cute story, you should totally continue it.
Giovanna Farina chapter 5 . 8/22/2008
I like the layout of this story. Nice and easy on the eyes. I hate reading blocks of text, it's almost painful.

Ahh, I can picture that happening the first time Shanks encounters Ace's famous narcolepsy. X33
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