Reviews for Two in the Bush
Vain Harmony chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is really, really sad. In a good way.
TheKeyIsLove chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Very in-character. He he, how like Machi to completely doubt herself.. hey, could you do one like this, I mean from her point of view, about when the curse broke and Yuki hugged her? It would make a good follow up.

Very well written.

Keep up the good work!

~Seth's Lover
Stripey chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
That's amazingly well written! I love how natural it all sounds, and completely in character too - very machi!
auditoryeden chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
erm...they date in the end of the series. As in "go out" as in Yuki has a girlfriend named "Machi". so they DO fall in love.
Mangajuicexd chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
I hate to disagree but, they do really end up with each other.
kennedy chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
y'kno they actually do end up getting together
characterlover chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
ok...1 i called yukimachi...also u can read the end of the seires on READ IT. PLEASE. ANY1 WHO READS THIS REVIEW!
Yori Hayashi chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Wow, you don't see many stories on here that make you think like that. Good job, and the descriptions were well done!
xxkoffeexx chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
How creatively written... _ I like the idea of Machi fantasizing. She can't always look like her expression inside. Great job!
Riana1 chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
Lovely and sad. Both of them are so very broken trying to measure up against something they can't even define.