Reviews for Squared Away
Rinne chapter 6 . 11/30/2006
Oh, Dean.

Nicely finished.
devonshire64 chapter 6 . 11/30/2006
great story. cant wait till next time.
sams1ra chapter 3 . 11/30/2006
Ok, I missed something. How'd they know peter was the killer? And I love seeing Dean kick down doors, too ;)
sasha2002 chapter 5 . 11/30/2006
Possessed Dean. How utterly kinky. Another great chapter. I like your writing style. Straight and to the point, and you keep the boys in character. Excellent.
Dolen Feredir chapter 5 . 11/29/2006
This was a great chapter! There was so much tension. I have to say I'm not sorry about Peter's fate. He was pretty psycho.

Will Sam and Dean encounter Emily again? That whole 'adoring eyes' scenario was funny.

Great stuff!
ILoveMyFish chapter 5 . 11/29/2006
Great chapter _
Toxicangel chapter 5 . 11/29/2006
i guess he wouldnt say that if it were some cute chick possessing him huh?

fantastic chapter... really really loved it.
Red Hardy chapter 3 . 11/29/2006
Sam studied Dean as they pulled up in front of the small cottage style home and he shut the car off. He had been quiet all the way there and Sam could practically see the tension in his shoulders. Dean didn’t deal well with the bad guys at the best of times. He mostly taunted them and then shot them. Not necessarily in that order. He certainly didn’t like having to make chit chat and chauffer them around.

-And we're off and running - and laughing out loud! Have I mentioned how much I LOVE the way you write the boys? You keep them SO totally in character! :)

“What’s your last name, Pete?”


Sam raised his eyebrows in disbelief and Dean actually snorted. The guy’s name was probably Jones, but that just wasn’t pretentious enough for him. Sam shook his head, dialed 911 and waited for the voice on the other end to ask for his emergency. “Yes, I’m at 415 Poplar. My name is Peter Shostakovich. I’m a member of the local symphony orchestra.” Sam could actually hear the 911 operator pausing, waiting for the worst. No doubt everyone knew what had been happening with the violinists. Sam put the requisite amount of worry, concern and borderline hysteria into his tone. “One of our violinists didn’t come to the funeral today.” He knew better than to look at Dean while he was trying to emote. Dean would be smirking and Sam wouldn’t be able to keep up the act. “I’m here at his house and… and I think he’s dead… I can see him through one of the back windows on the floor.”

“Dude,” he heard Dean whisper, “You should’ve gone to Hollywood.”

-I totally LOVED this little scene! :D I can see it so clearly and, as usual, I'm giggling my head off! :p

“Listen, you two morons!” Peter got right in Dean’s face and Sam could see his brother working not to knock the guy flat on his back. “I want to know what’s going on! My life is at stake here too!”

“Pete,” Dean said, his voice deceptively calm. “You’re staying here to talk to the police because this thing is all your fault. Now, back up.”

“How is this my fault?” Peter demanded angrily, raising a finger to poke Dean in the chest.

Before he could, however, Dean lashed out and sucker punched him. Peter crumbled to the ground clutching his stomach. “Sorry,” Dean growled, his voice still perfectly calm. “I have a no touching rule. Maybe I should have warned you about that earlier.” He took a step closer to stand over the man. “But to answer your question, this is your fault because you murdered…” Dean looked up at Sam frowning, “What was his name?”

“Andre,” Sam provided.

“Andre,” Dean repeated looking back down at Peter.

-Again, a perfect visual on this! I feel like I'm watching an episode here!

Dean had removed his tie and coat, throwing them haphazardly into the back seat. Walking a step in front of Sam, the sleeves of his dress shirt rolled up, Dean was a picture of relaxed violence.

Relaxed because he was finally out of the suit coat. Sam knew how much he hated that thing. It was part of why he liked making him wear it so often when they played insurance adjusters or whatever else.

-First, I LOVE the description of Dean, 'relaxed violence'. BRILLIANT! Second, you have Sam's character nailed, the way he likes tormenting Dean every chance he gets! :P

Violent because, well… because he was Dean. His brother was a trained weapon and right now all his attention was on the house in front of them. It was also because he still had an automatic tucked at the small of his back and he was carrying a sawed-off shotgun down at his side.

-Damn, I love Dean and weapons porn! :D

Another AWESOME chapter! And I couldn't agree with you more - there is something inherently sexy about Dean kicking in doors! :D
Unhobbity Hobbit chapter 5 . 11/29/2006
"A real musician… a violinist"

I sincerely hope he's not insinuating what I think he's insinuating, the evil, violin-playing, completely psychotic bastard!

Well, at least Mr. I-chose-the-wrong-instrument got his comeuppance, I'm quite pleased about that. I also love Dean being possessed (even if it was by a violinist) because there was a nice joining of interests from Andre and Dean there and they both got what they wanted, kind of.
supernaturalmommy chapter 5 . 11/29/2006
Okay I wasn't sure at first...(sorry, musicion plot and all, lol) but this has been a phenomenal story! A great read! Can't wait for the update!

supernatural mommy
devonshire64 chapter 4 . 11/29/2006
oh, sammy, such a sweetheart. poor Dean, dont worry we all love you too. great chapter, keep it up.
Rinne chapter 5 . 11/29/2006
He, Sam gets choked, and Dean's the one to pass out.
Evergreene chapter 5 . 11/29/2006
Yeah, that possession thing can be a bitch, hehe! Great chapter, it was nice to see Sam being choked again as we haven't seen much of that in the new season.
sams1ra chapter 2 . 11/29/2006
Still intriguing... Ooh, another chapter! ::dashes off to read::
sasha2002 chapter 4 . 11/29/2006
Sorry I haven't reviewed earlier. I am really enjoying this story. I love how you get the banter between the brothers just right. Keep up the good work.
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