This was an excellent story. It didn’t cater to the needs of the top 1 % and was entertaining for all. We need more young people like you in the world writing stories like these!

I also forgot to mention, for anyone who might read this, that while it is true that it is explicitly stated that Death Notes cannot be used to kill Shinigami - as we all know - the reverse is NOT true. Killing George's family is a sure way to secure a death sentence on Light's part. Something he wouldn't even risk given his big plans.

I feel this was fairly well written, and the characters' attitudes are right, but not their personalities. George would never be so cavalier about Light killing so many people, and the story itself seemed fairly mean spirited about her tendency for benign laziness vs. Light's tendency for vicious self pride. I also don't buy that George had any reason to tell Light her full name, or indeed her real name. (What happened to Milly?) Aside from the fact that the two mythologies are basically incompatible - which I understand - had to be ignored. Those are the things I thought didn't make sense about it, or might have been improved.

Dear Diva-esque,
This story was as interesting as I thought the cross-over would be. When I began to read it, I wondered what was the connection then I saw that it was the death note, and as the death note that Light was using was Georgia's death note. At first I was confused though I went with the flow, and the character depiction in your story was very good, and their arguing was very entertaining. Good luck on the next chapter, and thank you for your time,
Sincerely,
flamingpluffy

HAha! This was good. Loved the "He probably should have bought the beer more often." and "I was warming up. When you're dead, a decade is just warming up," SPOT ON GEORGE! Enjoyed this story, thanks for the read!

Man, that was too short. Very well written.

that's so perfect, I loved it

Heh. What a clever little crossover. :D

Good story. Crossed both universes over perfectly. It was short, sweet, to the point, and most importantly it WORKED. Good job.

Wow, that is *really* a terrible combination of factors, for everyone. It's interesting that George almost got Light to think a few times (the "et tu, Brute?" conversation), but since he doesn't respect her at all I guess none of it's going to stick. I don't think this can end well at all... Great work.

O_o That was really awesome for a weird crossover. Both were perfectly in character. Good work.

Poor poor Light. :)

Kicks ass. I like how you brought both shows together like that :3

I absolutely loved this! The interaction between them was great. A shame this doesn't have a few more chapters to it.

I wanna know what would have happened if Rube was his shinigami. now *THAT* is a conversation I'd like Kira to win.

Great fic

Kirux