Reviews for Mind Control
TinkStar87 chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
It seems like there should be more...what about him facing Elizabeth? Still a great read though! Read ya Later ;)
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
Great story!
Reyson chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
A nice little ficlet :) Shep being forced to jump off the balcony then to take the drugs to kill himself must have been awful for him. Just imagine losing control over your own actions, scary stuff! Glad that the team managed to get rid of the mind control. I enjoyed this tale.
Domino chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Great fic! Well done.

When's the next one? ;)
Delka chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Titan5 chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
Oh, wow. That would be terrifying, to have your body doing things against your will, especially if it involved making you kill yourself. John would especially hate the loss of control. Nicely done.
Samantha Schoenherr chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
good story...i am sure hopeing the you will write a squeal of is really good
Autumn leaves chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
Wow! What an interesting tale! I really enjoyed this! Poor John he gets into trouble without even knowing it.
Stealth Dragon chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
Very excellent. Poor shep. He can't even sneeze without someone wanting to shoot him for it.
Jersey13 chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
An interesting tale. A simple, heartwrenching, and thoroughly suspenseful story. What's next?