|Reviews for Body, Mind and Soul|
| spnMom chapter 15 . 3/5/2008
Wow, if this is your first completed fic, bravo! You had me on the edge of my couch... Now it is 5:40 am and I need to get up in less than 5 hours, so I guess I should go to bed. I am tempted to read Carlton's story first... but it will have to wait. Thanks for a great story!
| spnMom chapter 5 . 3/5/2008
Wow, your story is incredible so far. I would love to have someone able to show Sam the way to tap into whatever powers he has available to him. I also suspect that the guy in the hospital bed may be the bad guy... If so, cool idea.
| sams1ra chapter 15 . 1/21/2007
"When I turned around… I saw ‘It.’ I saw the yellow-eyed demon.” cool twist. "He kept me alive." Whoa. Damn plot bunnies… Good story, though I wish it had more of the brothers in it, especially more of Dean. you write the brothers well.
| Ghostwriter chapter 15 . 1/19/2007
Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
| J.A. Carlton chapter 15 . 1/19/2007
*blushing smiley* You know I love this chapter! An excellent tie up with just enough of a minor chord at the end to want a sequel! To want to see Kaitlyn come back and find out why YED helped her... what does he hope to gain?
It makes me very afraid for her, and for our beloved boys... her faith is what keeps her strong so I'm wondering if perhaps he's going to try and subvert her... maybe even make her think she OWE's him... make her question her faith and her own destiny since she too is one of the chosen...
and Poor Sammy... now he has the added burden of yet another person, another potential victim... and knowing his sense of responsibility... he's gonna be thinking it's all about his own failure... this is an awesome setup for more angst and philosophic discussion...
I hope you write a sequel Nevermore... or a follow up at the very least! :D
Once again, thanks for props, but as I keep saying... the story's all you woman... I just read it before everyone else, and for that I thank you! :D
Beauty job! I really hope to see more from you.
| Ghostwriter chapter 14 . 1/12/2007
Great job. Very exciting. Keep up the great work. Catch ya on the flip side.
| sams1ra chapter 14 . 1/12/2007
“Oh brother. I just got you into the chair. Ah, screw it." Hee hee. The portrait scene sort of reminded me of Harry Potter… D I'm kinds curious to see where you're gonna take it now.
| J.A. Carlton chapter 14 . 1/12/2007
Well, you know I just loved this chapter! It has the goosebumple factor, the haunted house chills and not to mention that damned creepy crawly feeling that happens at the back of my neck whenever I read that bit about her watching Sam slit Dean's throat! I'm tellin' ya that never fails to get me!
Love the Gollum-izing of Thomas as his will was broken and he found himself abandoned by his one and only "Friend", not to mention the disillusionment he must've felt upon realizing his aspirations were all but delusions and lies... Almost makes me feel sorry for him... almost. :D
Truly though... glad there's more coming, can't wait to see what else goes on... what surprises may yet be in store for the boys and their new ally...
Beauty job Nevermore... excellent and thanks so much for making this such an awesome story!
going to drop a little love on the thread while I can!
Awesome! Want more... is it Tues yet? :D
| Ghostwriter chapter 13 . 1/9/2007
Wow. Very cool. Yay. Sam's fightin' the evil mojo. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
| rozzy07 chapter 13 . 1/8/2007
Well that freaking Thomas has turned out worse that I could have ever thought - going after Dean like that! Bad bad Thomas. Still Dean even under attack has this wonderful, almost primal quality about him and this just summed him up so well:
“Has anyone ever told you…” Dean weakly got to his hands and knees and gasped a little for breath, “that you kick like a girl?”
This comment enraged Thomas and he stepped forward to kick again. Dean blocked the kick with his arm, while sweeping Thomas’ other leg out from under him, and he landed hard.
All I can think as Dean is battered senseless is that Bad-Tommy knows that Dean has truly has been molded into a weapon to destroy evil, whilst Sam remains the conduit for power. Power to do permanent damage me thinks. So Thomas kicking the shite out of our oldest Winchester boys may well find this coming back to bite him in the butt later (please!). Still beyond all this both brothers suffer for this external connection to the demon. Good vs Evil can be such a bitch at times. Still I have to confess that I am so loving your rich interpretation of this fact so that I am now seriously so addicted to it that I need a new fix NOW! Rozzy.
| CatBeist chapter 13 . 1/8/2007
Another great chapter Nevermore... And poor Sam... and poor Dean... and poor Kaitlyn too... man these people don't have their best of times at the moment... but we'll manage to turn that around... right? I mean... Right? Yes they will... though I might have the slightest suspicion that Kaitlyn won't make it? Or be happily join her husband on the other side... but then again... what do I know?
| sams1ra chapter 13 . 1/8/2007
"He’d thought about drawing a mustache and glasses on Sam, but work before play" hee hee hee. I'm evil, cuz all I could think of was 'do it, Dean, do it!' lol. The confrontation between Dean and Thomas was awesome. This whole chapter was awesome. Time for Sammy to save the day.
| J.A. Carlton chapter 13 . 1/8/2007
Okay! as noted before... we've got Sam on the move! Good boy Sammy I know you can do it! You're a Winchester... get out there and save the day boy!
I marvel at your gift for description! how you enable the reader to see exactly waht you want them to see! Tis a beautiful thing...
The return to Thomas' house, the visual of how she coiled her energy, winding it downward, piling up that potential energy tighter and tighter until she was able to spring! and pop it out there! Beautiful description!
And of course let's not forget the Dean angst! Man you got a handle on that boy's emotions! First dad and now Sam? come on! (and thanks for bringing Laura into play... :D I appreciate that to no end! won't say the squee thing again... cause that just strikes me... odd today) but you get the point!
Also love how he's torn between wanting to beat the crap out of that son of a bitch and STILL protecting his baby brother! Sheesh! talk about a quandry!
Poor boys... Poor Kaitlyn... all they need to do is combine their efforts and kick some ethereal ass! I know I know... easier said than done... but still can't wait to see how you're gonna get this bastard and not have anyone any the wiser!
but leave me wanting more that's for sure!
I'm waiting... Nevermore... as patiently as possible... which doesn't say much but you know... is it Friday yet?
| friendly chapter 12 . 1/6/2007
awesome story... keep it up...
| rozzy07 chapter 12 . 1/5/2007
Wow what a way to take a story forwards. Sorry for the late review status but what with the site being seriously hinkey and RL staking a claim to my time sneaking back to this story or any other has been difficult! Anyway how pleased am I sit down and be able to read a whole huge new chunk of this story. Kate has really come into her own here, a true guide for Sam. I loved how she showed him to seek out fellow psychics and how he recognised the different auras each person gave out (and his being so lovely and bright too!). As for that sneaky Thomas the battle of mental-head-wars between him and Sam has only just began I fear. Sam is only just learning of his own strengths whilst Thomas has a firm understanding of his. Kate has helped keep Sam anchored but now alone in his own mind facing such a manipulative foe the true battle has only just begun. As for this cliffie - let me just say I hope you're going to post an update double quick speed as I need more soon please! Roz.