|Reviews for Childe|
| Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
wow...interesting story... you should really expand on this one it could be a good story...
Smells like Rain...
| Mark R. Whitten chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Great job! I love the part about the slaughtered stuffed animals, as it seems to be the perfect allagory for the end of her innocence. I found your writing style to be very similar to my own. I love that you have such a dedication to proper punctuation and grammar. The part about mixing togehter the After Death Experiences of both Marcus and Krista was an especially nice touch. I didn't even realize just how similar there deaths really were until I read your story. Krista's regret was very on par with her character; good job on that. I hope that you will continue to write, as you apear to have a real talent for it.
| urbendragon chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
can't wait for next chapter!
| TigerTiger02 chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
awesome description. you should totally continue it, its good.
| Aradia Star chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
Neat. Is this a one-shot, or is it going to be updated?
Why are vampires so damn hot?
Awesome job :)
| TheInvincibleKay chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
AWSOME STORY! I love it, update please!
| B.Grym chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
I finally got around to reading it. Right the Dream sequence was kind of strange but I'm sure you'll explain it later. I think that the teddy bears should have lived, that part was sad but it's probably just me.
| anonymous chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
that was real good. i hope your gonna continue.
| PassiveAggressive101 chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
Wow...that was surprisingly good...
| courtney chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
that was real good! i hope you update soon!