|Reviews for Peonies|
| loyal-girl4 chapter 22 . 4/10/2012
This is so inexplicably sad. I cannot believe they died.
| elizabethday chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Oh my gosh I'm seriously depressed right now. It was incredibly well written though!
| Sabella Rose chapter 22 . 2/21/2012
I crying and can't stop
| OcSickGirl chapter 21 . 2/21/2012
So freaking sad, I'm ugly crying right now!
| OcSickGirl chapter 5 . 2/21/2012
Jeez Rosalie s still a bitch...love Emmett hough. :)
| OcSickGirl chapter 4 . 2/21/2012
It's breaking my heart!
| ThiglDub chapter 22 . 2/7/2012
Your story was interesting in the beginning. But, as a whole, it lacked depth. The ending was less than satisfying. It was improbable, just awful. You didn't really take the time to write the final chapters in a way that could be acceptable to the reader.
I don't need a hearts and flowers happy ending every time, but, this was just above and beyond a reasonable conclusion.
Personally, I think you wrote yourself into a corner, and just killed everyone off to be done with it.
| craizypet chapter 22 . 1/22/2012
Agreed a good author does know when to stop writing, i was worried that you would try and change the ending... Gad that you kept to the tragedy!
| C chapter 12 . 1/4/2012
Everything about this story was so much more than any other bella/edward story that i usually read. The first chapter had the tears rising but by the end the tissues were littering the floor around me.
| FakeGirl101 chapter 21 . 11/30/2011
this story is seriously fucked up. I'm not saying that this wasn't well written because it was but the whole plot is just so sad and like I said before; fucked up
| ellarose85 chapter 22 . 11/15/2011
I'm stuck speacheles... I don't know if I should say something hateful or not. Yes the whole thing was writen greatlly but there's still the fact that you chose to kill them! What on earth posessed you to do that? Just out of curiosity couldn't you find a different ending? A happy one? Because, let's face it, real life has enough drama to last us a life time, and I'm damn sure don't want to read something I, and manny others for that matter, see every day...death!
Please don't take this the wrong way or anything, it's not my intention to do so, I'm just curious why you choose the ending that you did. Really I hoped till the very end that something happy will happen for them...maybe even meet in paradise idk...anything that will chear me up.
Now i'm not sure I have the guts to read any of your stories...
Fanklly this is the second story I've read with character death, the first one being a one shot all human story. But hey it's an all human story, people die, you expect that...but vampires? Come on!
If you have a happy ending story let me know, otherwise I cant stomach any more like this one.
Sorry for any inconvenience I maight've give with this comment...but it's what I feel and I couldn't hold my self not to tell you.
Other then that, te story was great...the ending I had problems with.
| CloseAcct chapter 21 . 11/15/2011
wow, just a fantastic job! This is my second time reading this story and I still spent the majority of it crying like a baby! I haven't read a "edward returns" story where they still love each other so completely and there isn't any negative feelings. I usually think their corny and lame, but this was so beautiful and ya okay im still crying! I need tissue! lol
| xxxLauraaxxx chapter 22 . 11/13/2011
omg that was so sad i was crying at the end...
u r such an amzing writer
| usaypotato chapter 22 . 11/10/2011
Sillybella, please forgive me for not reviewing each chapter of this stark, beautiful story. I could not stop reading long enough to breath, much less write. So many aspects of this story I admire:
The changing p.o.v. without announcement. I am grateful you feel confident enough in your readers to allow each character's thoughts to unfold without signage.
Your clipped, magnified prose and the spare length of your chapters. Most people look at the beauty of a landscape and take a panoramic shot; you micro-focus on one simple image and examine the layered complexities.
Your monsters have immensely human emotions.
Thank you Sillybella for writing such a beautiful, unique story and sharing it with us.
| Sumi-chan-desu chapter 21 . 11/6/2011
I really enjoyed this story :')