|Reviews for He Stares at the Water|
| Nispedana chapter 1 . 1/18
Oh my goodness! That was beautiiifffuuullll. *sobs*
I can totally see all the heart break in all three parties, and they were written well.
Thank you for sharing this story with us! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
This story is so beautiful, I don't understand why it doesn't have more reviews! I read it all the time it's so good
| Lex Lina chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Even if its forbidden, their story is full of an unique love. Thanks a lot for this one too
| Allure of Darkness chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
This story is so beautiful 3
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
This was lovely. I've been having a zutara obsession lately, and your story was exactly what I needed. Tragic but beautiful.
| Leah chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
That was the most beautiful thing I've ever read I love it
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
I love this, your writing is amazing. I think this story is so beautiful and underrated
| misszuko chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
I'm in love :'D I don't usually like to hear of stories of Zuko and Mai together but this story one word AMAZING. I love that it's from her point of view and that there is no dialogue. I applaud you.
| dmsike chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
wow, my heart is breaking.
| cr7dr11cr chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
This was beautifully written. I never liked Mai, but you made me feel sorry for her.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO AND MAKE ME CRY
That was so sad. My heart broke not for Mai, but for Zuko and Katara, who could never be together. Beautiful. Just beautiful.
| T.Pizzle50.GK chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
This made me want to cry! My heart broke for both Mai and Zuko.
| BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Wow. This was unexpected. Amazing work you have here :)
I am sorry for the Fire Lady though.
| MayGirl85 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Lovely and sad.
| Jane Odair chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
That was really beautiful. I feel bad for Mai in this but I do see it being partly true for Zuko and Katara as they grow older.