|Reviews for Seamelss A One Shot|
| BlueDepths chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
Charlynn! How beautiful is this? Okay, at first, I was literally SHOCKED that they were both pornographers, but it helped a great deal knowing they were usually solo workers, and that they were each other's first partners during such a thing. You descrive everything so well, I mean, I like it how we see most things from Ryan's perspective, he is my favorite character, and his thoughts and feelings are even more interesting to read about than Marissa's. The rain coat was just brilliant - I can just imagine it. I like how Ryan first saw her in that scene, as a total stranger, not knowing that they were going to be working together. The wedding was amazing, how it was just the two of them, and some witnesses, underlining their relationship consisting of only them, even more. Love your fics! They are so original, and always interesting.
| chasitybsp chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
Another unbelievable one shot! So original and so sweet. Thanks for the story!- Cant wait until your able to update the other fics! Awesome writer!
| Jenn chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Wow! this story was great, i really enjoyed reading it as i do all your other stories.
ryan and marissa are so cute!
| Trust.Hope.Love chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Wow Charlynn! You never cease to amaze me! That was amazing! Btw...what kind of movie were they doing? Anyway...you are a truly amazing writer and I always love the new one shots that you come up with. Even though I tend to like longer stories more, your one shots are too amazing not to read! Keep up the great writing! Was there supposed to be a second part to this, or did I read that wrong?
| areil2010 chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
that was so wow and i loved the last line "a seamless, complete, ideal match" ahh! completely perfect.
i have one question were they doing a porn movie?
Great one shot as always!
| benjisbackup chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
WOW! Charlynn! there is only 1 word for this story and that is AMAZING! and this is completely random but, i also love Italian food and ice-cream lol.