Reviews for Daughters of the Marluk
dwj chapter 2 . 5/10/2007
Excellently written dialogue and stage setting but are you going somewhere with this? So far all you've got is two chapters of "Don't go Julie, beware the Ides of March already". Clarissa isn't making a difference to how matters proceed and she isn't changing herself either. A good protagonist acts. She doesn't just wave her hanky as other people go out to do stuff.
chubby redburn chapter 2 . 12/17/2006
I am still enthralled. Another fine chapter.
chubby redburn chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
I was flattened by this story. Very evocative of Katherine Kurtz. Convincing characters, spot-on dialogue, and if you will allow me a small jest, very colourful discriptions that bought your tale to life.

You waste your talent doing fan fiction. I believe that you have the skill to sucessfully write your own stories.