|Reviews for My Celestial Angel '|
| cookielover435 chapter 22 . 6/4/2016
Your lack of punctuation and spelling mistakes were ridiculously horrible that i actually had trouble reading some parts of the story. As some reviewers mentioned you should get a beta reader.
Secondly, the story doesn't make sense. You mentioned in earlier chapters that HitsuHina is the main pairing, but there wasn't even a single moment where we saw Toshiro and Momo together alone. The characters are OOC especially Hisagi. And that Kouri girl is so annoying. If she were in the Manga or Anime i would hate her. This doesn't feel like a HitsuHina story. The story was way off the pairing. The ending was even worse. If this was really a HitsuHina story, why did you make Toshiro kiss Kouri in the end? That's what i don't understand. This is probably one of my least favorite stories so far. It was unbelievably STUPID! Making Hitsugaya and Hinamori a couple was a complete waste of time especially when there was another girl in the way. I have never read a story with punctuation and spelling mistakes as HORRIBLE as this.
| Fanfic Reader chapter 22 . 6/2/2016
This is one of the worst stories i've ever read with so much OOC. Almost everybody was OOC especially Hitsugaya. You mentioned that Hitsugaya and Hinamori was the main pairing, and throughout this fanfic i did not even see a moment where they were together. The only thing i saw was when Hitsugaya was comforting Hinamori when she had that dream about Aizen. That was only it. If this was really a hitsuhina fic, how come we barely saw them together alone? You ruined the ending of the story by making Hitsugaya kiss another girl. I am going to repeat myself. Your characterization of Hitsugaya is horrible, there was no real storyline, and your lack of punctuation and spelling errors made it difficult for me to read.
I have never read any fanfic as bad as this. Worst fanfic ever.
| Tony28 chapter 22 . 12/6/2014
That was cool nd not a single loop hole... I can't for the next chapter
| hitsuhina fans chapter 22 . 7/26/2013
Honestly i don't like your story! The end of your story it s just incomprehensible.. How dare you pretend to write a hitsuhina's story whereas toshiro kisses another girl in the end?
| Icypeachdragon chapter 22 . 7/12/2013
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!WHY Toshirou WHY!You gotta be with hinamori .
| Momo DarkShadow chapter 22 . 3/15/2013
Awww when will the next chapter be out!?Don't give up on this story?!
| Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 22 . 8/30/2012
PLEEEAASEEEE WRİTE A DAMN CHAP! BECAUSE İT BEEN 4 YEARS!
| Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 21 . 8/30/2012
XDDDDD POOR HİSAGİ! (yeah,i never throught i will say this)
OMG! HİNAMORİ İS PREGNANT! *faints*
| Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 20 . 8/30/2012
| Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 19 . 8/30/2012
WHAT?! U CAN'T! HE LOVES BOTH MOMO AND KOURİ,MOMO LOVES HİTSUGAYA,KOURİ LOVES İCHİGO,İCHİGO LOVES RUKİA,AND HİTSUGAYA AND RUKİA'S COUSİN WİLL MARRY?!
i am starting hating your mind...(just because u are thinking sepparate momo ans toushirou)
| Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 18 . 8/30/2012
OMG! TOUSHİROU SAVED HER! *faints*
| Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 17 . 8/30/2012
wait,now kouri's mother controls hollows?!
| Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 16 . 8/30/2012
İ KNEW İT! YEAH,İ WAS ALREADY KNEW İT! but...when and how?
| Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 15 . 8/30/2012
WHAT? WASN'T SHE LOVED WAS İCHİGO?!
oh and... GOOD PLAN KOURİ-CHAN!
| Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 14 . 8/30/2012
XXXDDDDD İT WAS SO FUNNY! and...who she is in love wasn't ichigo? she already told it to toushirou chapters before?