Reviews for Unintended Consequences
JeanneZ84 chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
even when Mark gets the mumps off of some girl Milt takes good care of him fussing over him which is very nice.

I read this now and once before a while back.

Great story keep up the great stories.I feel bad for Mark though cause he feels so bad though.

sbishoff chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
Great story. I love reluctance that Frank felt, and that he still stayed. Hardcastle's concern and prompting Mark to eat, after reprimanding him for kissing the girl while undercover. And Mark, beyond feeling lousy, has concerns that he can't stop worrying about. It was a good story.
smithcrafter chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
Too bad Milt had mumps as a kid, isn't it? :)
owlcroft chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Hardcastle as nursemaid, I love it! Poor Mark's so pathetic he gets the judge's homemade soup and even the remote; what a nice, understated way of showing affection and anxiety. "You oughta think of this as some kind of vacation". Yeah, right. Poor little chipmunk. Even your "little" stories are memorable!
khollie chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Poor Mark! And I thought I was mean to him! I am an EMT, should I go and fuss over him?