|Reviews for Break me|
| Moon'sApprentice chapter 9 . 8/12/2015
When a demon mates, they will not be able to disobey their Alpha and that is why I am very confused because you did not expound Itachi's and Naruto's mating. You did not clarify Itachi's intention. Yes, you said those stuffs but when it comes to Naruto, Itachi goes 'mate' and 'killing' then to 'flirting' then to 'malice' then to 'care and possessive'. I am VERY, thoroughly confuse! This would have been good if you just expound the important details, not the useless ones. I get it that it is just a short story but I've read a bunch of stories shorter than this and they made their points and essentials clear.
| tabitha.scott.923 chapter 3 . 11/3/2014
I really hope that the person saves naruto!
| tabitha.scott.923 chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Good first chapter. Poor naruto!
| Deadly Shadow chapter 2 . 5/4/2013
Itachi protected Naruto?
Hmph still hate the dude...
For the first chapter and you know...
I um... Make these reviews weird don't I?
| Deadly Shadow chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
*Adds to the list of reasons I have to kill Itachi*
Okay, 134 now just fifty more and it should be legal...
| Rebel-Angel6 chapter 9 . 5/21/2009
...Wow. Absolutely AWESOME!
| LittlePorcelain chapter 9 . 8/14/2008
Aw! I love the ending- because they are going home to Konoha it fits the last two sentences! I which 'Naruto' could really end as a 'Happily ever after', but from what I heard, it ends as a tragedy- if only I had known that before I watched the fist episode. I can't stand tragedies but I've been stuck to the show since the first time it was aired(In the U.S.) From what I heard, Sasuke dies but I'm not sure...
| xXx chapter 9 . 1/1/2008
Oniisan means older brother and Otouto means younger brother
| noname00 chapter 9 . 9/27/2007
i liked how you ending it, especially that last sentence with the leafs...anywho it was fun reading this
| superninjaturtle chapter 4 . 7/20/2007
ok so i just thought you should know, gaara's father has been dead since the chuunin exams...well, before that actually. orochimaru killed him and took his place in order to take control of the village hidden in the sand and make an "aliance" with the sound village. baki found the kazekage's body after the chuunin exams and found that orochimaru was an imposter...well something like that...with much more in between, mind you. but i'm sorry if you already knew that...i just thought you should know. and i know that not everyone writes things as they actually happened in the series; sometimes, to make the story work, things are put in a different way...i wasn't sure if that was your intention or not. everything else is really good!
| superninjaturtle chapter 3 . 7/19/2007
ok...so i have one complaint and one complaint only...both kabuto and itachi would no longer be teens. itachi would be 22 and kabuto 24. that's absolutely all...except that itachi and sasuke are both sadistic bastards...no wonder they're related...:D well besides that your writing is really great! it flowed and that's what makes it a good story! well that, and you had good grammer and spelling all that jazz!
| durh chapter 9 . 6/27/2007
katahou means one side, one party, the other side. again. a good story
| looosergurl chapter 3 . 6/27/2007
ni-chan and ni-san, mean older brother, the 'nii' is older. younger brother is otouto, tei, dai or oto. but nii san and nii chan. are just different terms of indearment. good story though.
| naruandsasumine chapter 9 . 6/19/2007
aww i love it im crying
| naruandsasumine chapter 1 . 6/18/2007