|Reviews for Break me|
| Deadly Shadow chapter 2 . 5/4/2013
Itachi protected Naruto?
Hmph still hate the dude...
For the first chapter and you know...
I um... Make these reviews weird don't I?
| Deadly Shadow chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
*Adds to the list of reasons I have to kill Itachi*
Okay, 134 now just fifty more and it should be legal...
| Rebel-Angel6 chapter 9 . 5/21/2009
...Wow. Absolutely AWESOME!
| BrokenBloodDrops chapter 9 . 8/14/2008
Aw! I love the ending- because they are going home to Konoha it fits the last two sentences! I which 'Naruto' could really end as a 'Happily ever after', but from what I heard, it ends as a tragedy- if only I had known that before I watched the fist episode. I can't stand tragedies but I've been stuck to the show since the first time it was aired(In the U.S.) From what I heard, Sasuke dies but I'm not sure...
| xXx chapter 9 . 1/1/2008
Oniisan means older brother and Otouto means younger brother
| noname00 chapter 9 . 9/27/2007
i liked how you ending it, especially that last sentence with the leafs...anywho it was fun reading this
| superninjaturtle chapter 4 . 7/20/2007
ok so i just thought you should know, gaara's father has been dead since the chuunin exams...well, before that actually. orochimaru killed him and took his place in order to take control of the village hidden in the sand and make an "aliance" with the sound village. baki found the kazekage's body after the chuunin exams and found that orochimaru was an imposter...well something like that...with much more in between, mind you. but i'm sorry if you already knew that...i just thought you should know. and i know that not everyone writes things as they actually happened in the series; sometimes, to make the story work, things are put in a different way...i wasn't sure if that was your intention or not. everything else is really good!
| superninjaturtle chapter 3 . 7/19/2007
ok...so i have one complaint and one complaint only...both kabuto and itachi would no longer be teens. itachi would be 22 and kabuto 24. that's absolutely all...except that itachi and sasuke are both sadistic bastards...no wonder they're related...:D well besides that your writing is really great! it flowed and that's what makes it a good story! well that, and you had good grammer and spelling all that jazz!
| durh chapter 9 . 6/27/2007
katahou means one side, one party, the other side. again. a good story
| looosergurl chapter 3 . 6/27/2007
ni-chan and ni-san, mean older brother, the 'nii' is older. younger brother is otouto, tei, dai or oto. but nii san and nii chan. are just different terms of indearment. good story though.
| naruandsasumine chapter 9 . 6/19/2007
aww i love it im crying
| naruandsasumine chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
| Exploded Toilet Bowl chapter 9 . 4/8/2007
Sorry that it took me so long to reply to this. Anyway...
I loved this whole story. Even though the chapters may be short, but they truly expressed the meaning of each chapter, and I liked all of them. Wonderful description and so far, I don't think I have spotted grammatical errors.
Now, on to the characters...I like Itachi here, insane and all and Sasuke. I knew that he is the one who still wouldn't kill his brother, and that's because Itachi is HIS brother. I only feel sorry for Naruto, since he erm...well, I don't have to spell it out, do I? XD
I didn't actually think it would just end here. I thought it wasn't an absolute ending. Well, not an ending to completely conclude off...Just that your ending told me that they are well, off and back to Konoha now. Only thing is, what about the 'We'll patch up later' part? We won't be able to see them patch up at all?
'Somehow, even the farthest leaf, can return home; if only shown the way.' I just like how meaningful this sentence is. It just tells me that your story is like, ya know, full of faith and believe...
Continue to write more! I think I'd be more than happy to read them. :P By the way, just interested, will you be making a sequel to this?
| Cal Sathe chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
So sad... yet so happy and so beautiful!
| Radwimp chapter 9 . 3/18/2007
Yay! Very nice job on these chapters...I hope you continue this!