|Reviews for In the eyes of an assassin|
| Shimsham chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
A very nice written piece of work based around the Half Life universe.
Great job, you have an amazing talent.
Keep it up.
| Shitaka chapter 1 . 12/30/2002
hmmmm...g-man? its head craB not craP...and you forget all the security doors are key pads and retinal scanner no hand stuff. Hmmmm should've given him the machine gun oo or let him get ahold of the glue-on gun... It was pretty good though nothing in comparison to the games, needed more aliens less ppl. Too bad he didn't run into gordon...he mighta lived lols
p.s. i thought it was written fine w/ the paragraphs it had just like a book so dont let other ppl worry you...my first stuff was worse than this...format wise
| NiteHawk451 chapter 1 . 6/27/2001
Nice story, but why did the sientist go to the anonmous materials lab?
| Bio-Major Agent85 chapter 1 . 6/23/2001
sorry that it's not paragraphed guys, but i really don't like doing it, and i don't like the way it looks. So once again i am sorry for the strain, but thats the way they are going to be.
| Doc2 chapter 1 . 6/23/2001
Pretty depressing, and serisouly, learn how to paragraph. That was a real hard read, buddy. Other than that, it's OK.
| Desigo chapter 1 . 6/22/2001
I ain't readin' that! Learn how to paragraph, man!