Reviews for The Gift
Vanne-the-bookworm chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
Great job. I cried when I read: 'Col. Mustang, It's okay to cry. Ed' :)
jelexd chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
If you intended to make my cry with this then you succeded. The story is really good and your writing style is awesome. But such a sad story
KB1510 chapter 1 . 9/7/2014

I feel so bad for Roy and Al :(. In fact, I feel bad for EVERYONE. I was so close to crying when Ed said goodbye to Roy. WHYYYYYYYYY!

Amazing job :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
This made me cry as soon as I read the letter n even worse wen mustang started crying. Good job writing it.
Avid Reader chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
im not sure if I have gotten this emotional over any other piece of writing.

All I can say it this is wonderful, and thank you for writing.
Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
EDOOOOOO! ;_; *emotional breakdown*

He-He-He-He-*hiccup*He-HE CAN'T DIEEE!
xxnarufanxx chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
oh gott i almost started to cry! wonderfully written!
royed lover chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
This reminds me of a story on YouTube that is also Roy x Ed called "empty shell"
Victorious-Mind chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
I was fine in the beginning, then in the middle came the tears, at the end I totally broke. What a sad story, it pulled my heart strings and I am so touched. Lovely.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Awwww. I mean ... awwwwww!
AllenxEdward chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Awwwwwwwwwww! So sad! Poor Roy... *sad face*
Cartoon Cow chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Oh my god i had roy tell edward the same thing in my oneshot! Haha funny how a writers mind works. Good story, it was believe able XD
SamanthaMeloes chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Oooo*cries* THAT WAS SAD!Dx Poor Roy! Oooooo...heh...Great job...
Creative Spark chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
way to make me cry! :(

DormantByeBye chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
This is so sad i started Cying!

Iknow it's stupid to cry over a story but i did.
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