|Reviews for Crossovers 2|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2016
XDXDXDXDxdxDXxDXDxXXDDXDDdddXDxDXdd *falls at floor because of the laughts*
| YourFavoriteReader chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
| bbkiller56gmail chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
honey-senpai is L's scessor 0.0"
| paul chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Aww so sweet...Honey senpai was chose as his successor...(he is good at martial arts anyway and he love to play toys like near,he eats sweet like L too)
| Parrot Post chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
That last line makes the fic. :)
| Brittany Bennett chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
OMG DAT WAS SOOO FUNNY I LUV LAWLIETT AND HUNNI I LOLED AT "He FOUND his succesor" KEEP WRITNG GOOD BYE
| Schermionie chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Oh, BRILLIANT! Seriously, this is genius. Hilarious. I love how you thought up a semi-plausible reason for L to go there, though the idea of Light and Tamaki being related is a very strange one. o.O
A few nitpicks for you...
'But the fact that Raito's cousin, Tamaki Suoh was close friends with the son of the Ootori Empire was no coincidence.' - There needs to be another comma after 'Suoh'.
'Last month, all the main competitors of the Ootori family (save for the Suoh's) had been wiped out in a mass heart attack epidemic.' - Because it's vital to the meaning of the sentence, the brackets around 'save for the Suoh's' shouldn't be there. Brackets make it look like just added information rather than an important fact.
'He circled the table slowly, blinking multiple times to assure that this was real, only to see (with some disappointment) a blonde boy with a fork...' - 'assure that' should be 'assure himself that' and 'blonde' needs to be 'blond', as 'blonde' is the feminine form.
I realise you wrote this years ago and may know all this and not wish to edit it, but being pedantic, I had to point it out anyway. _
But, *anyway*, as I said, I thought this was hilarious. My favourite line, aside from the ending one, would probably have to be: 'The boy blinked. And then smiled brightly, all stars and sunshine and happiness.'
That is just the perfect description of Honey.
This was a totally awesome and inventive crossover. Thanks for the laughs!
| xD chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
haha that's so funny XD
and short :P
| ranchan-akari chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
And of course his successor is decided by how much they love their sweets. *giggles*
| pinklatent chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
rofl, brilliant crossover!
| CharmedbyFire chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
oh ho ho, this was great!
| Cynderfire chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
ROFL. This is the epitome of all crossovers fanfics. xD
| CYLi chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
| Lylo West chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
This was so funny! I love it. I don't even know all that much about OHSHC, but this is really good, and I love the ending.
| LawlietRocks chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Now i can go to bed feeling the most satisfied girl in the world ater a really sweet bed-time story. xD
What more do i still need to say?
You rocks. ;D