|Reviews for Full Metal Alchemist The Life Of Alphonse Elric|
| booksthough chapter 4 . 6/12/2012
I love story..is very well written and cute! Please write more! (:
| Mystical Sand chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
It's nice to see Al get to spend some time alone with his mother. And it's sweet how he helped take care of Ed.
| Mystical Sand chapter 3 . 12/2/2006
This is a great story. I love how you write Al's point of view as a young child and his relationships with Ed and his mother.
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