Reviews for Wax Wings
TwilightTarabekah chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Amazing but sad scene from (also amazing) show awesome myth great story! :) That might not be the best way to say it, but it's how I choose to explain it.
SpaceRoses chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
WOW! That was good. The story of the wax wings was always one of my favorite Greek ones and it fits FMA so well. I love how you spliced each section with words from the story. Great job, this is a true work of art.
September's Nobara chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Very good parallels with the short story/metaphor. I did notice, though, a missing period in the sentence, ""Al, we're going to bring her back.""; however, this was a very intriguing work of written art. Great work, all in all!

Take care,

~September's Nobara.