Reviews for The House Guests
Michelle Mi-chan D chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Interesting concept for a story, but you really really need to work on grammar and spelling... It's so bad in so many places that it's difficult (almost impossible) to understand what you are trying to say. If you have a hard time with spelling and grammar, then I highly recommend finding someone who is good at it to act as an editor. If people cannot understand what you are saying or what is going on in the story, they will not be likely to continue reading. You know? **is a grammar and spelling nazi** Other than that, I am most curious about this story, and I hope to see improvements and updates to this story!

Have a wonderful day.

Sincerely,

Mi-chan
YuYuInuWolf chapter 9 . 2/23/2011
definatly do more! im caught on this! U. NEED. TO. DO. MORE. okay that doesnt seem as dramatic as I hoped but still! ore! And i think kurama and brandy should be focused on soon
YuYuInuWolf chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
I like this! Oh its cute and hot at the same time! Definatly keep it up!
Kerica chapter 7 . 7/12/2010
OMFG I'M SO HAPPY YOU USED MY IDEA!

*huggles/gloups/tackles*
Akamery chapter 6 . 7/4/2010
oh wow, I remember reading this way back when XD I'm glad you updated, and poor Jin for flying into that oak tree!

I was thinking about how you need to get Kurama to snap well, Kurama being the calm, cool and collected type, it'll be hard to do. What if you try thinking about Youko and what would get Youko off? Get through one you get through the other!
Akamery chapter 4 . 2/2/2009
very nice, i like it

Keri

I like pepermine ice-cream too!
Akamery chapter 5 . 2/2/2009
oh dear... XD I can see where this is going and don't disapoint me! :p

Update soon

Kerica
XxXBLaCKRoSEesXxX chapter 4 . 1/17/2009
OMG you updated! i loved this story so much! keep up the great work! please please please update sometime soon! :)

XBLaCKRoSEesX
Haru Inuzuka chapter 2 . 1/16/2009
Hahaha! This is pretty funny! What will happen now? Will Brany go with Kurama and Sheea go with Touya? Plz continue, kay? I want to know what happens!
XxXBLaCKRoSEesXxX chapter 3 . 1/4/2008
hahaha i needed a good laugh and i got it needs more chapters!

can't wait for more chaos
Scarlett Wolf chapter 3 . 12/30/2007
lol funny chap! ooh i just got an idea! have sheena (the one in the story)and Brandy get stuff out of nowhere. like if Hiei and kuwarbra start fighting again, (which will happen sooner or later) they get popcorn out of nowhere, and watch them fight while eating popcorn. (did that make sense? sorry if i'm not making sense i haven't slept in over 38 hours, damn sleeping problems.) anyways talk to u later

~Thorn
Youko1776 chapter 2 . 12/27/2007
Wow, very interesting. plz update soon
Scarlett Wolf chapter 2 . 12/27/2007
lol that was so funny! i couldn't breath for a minute. by the way what did you mean when you said “Do you that they could have been doing it?” i'm a little confused. anyways talk to u later.
ToonyTwilight chapter 2 . 12/27/2007
your story seem good keep it up
Scarlett Wolf chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
i really love this so far! please update soon so i can read more.
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