Reviews for As Long As You're Mine
Guest chapter 12 . 4/10
This is a beautiful story
Guest chapter 7 . 4/10
I'm sorry you got mean comments
Guest chapter 6 . 4/10
Sasuke you abused
Guest chapter 5 . 4/10
WTF sasuke I thought your trying to be good now
Guest chapter 4 . 4/10
What a beautiful chapter
Guest chapter 3 . 4/10
Is hinata still in love with naruto or someone else
Guest chapter 2 . 4/10
You said kissing not kidding
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10
Guest chapter 7 . 12/31/2012
it was a good story makes me excited to read this story and plus it's narusaku story
Casualreader chapter 7 . 12/19/2012
I don't dislike your writing because you're a "Sasuke-lover" or whatever, but your flow really needs work. Just saying.
acetwolf94 chapter 12 . 11/22/2012
Its nice. I like it! I enjoyed reading it.
BloodyGoddess chapter 12 . 7/31/2012
Invincible.With.You chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
Good story :D I didn't mind the plot :) I felt that it was a little too short though... there should have been a few more chapters that allows for the characters to interact more. I felt that you should have described the scene where Naruto took the rep for Sakura's daughter. Naru's name should have been more original "Naru" is just ... well no offense ... uncreative in my opinion. But names really don't have that big an effect on the story so ... :P
Janiya07 chapter 12 . 2/24/2012
This was a cute story. I'm glad you made naruto and Sakura forgiving in the end. I have a love/hate relationship with sasuke so I was satisfied. :) I would just recommend proofreading a little more. You say one word when you really mean something else, like "lean" when you mean "learn" :)
KitBeast chapter 11 . 2/5/2012
SERIOUSLY. he ATTACKED Sakura, KIDNAPPED Naru and he gets away with it with yet another retarded punishment?

I think by now someone would have realised that Naruto is allowing his emotions to influence his decisions as Hokage and they would have had him removed or at least said something about it
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