|Reviews for Stars and Suns in Her Eyes|
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/21/2013
stars and suns is really good please continue it
| greeneyesCutie chapter 15 . 7/4/2013
Oh so sad
| greeneyesCutie chapter 13 . 7/4/2013
| greeneyesCutie chapter 12 . 7/4/2013
| greeneyesCutie chapter 11 . 7/4/2013
| greeneyesCutie chapter 8 . 7/4/2013
I loved Sarah Jane
| greeneyesCutie chapter 5 . 7/4/2013
| greeneyesCutie chapter 4 . 7/4/2013
| greeneyesCutie chapter 3 . 7/4/2013
Oh I love This one.
| greeneyesCutie chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
| greeneyesCutie chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Love the motorcycle ! Fun start
| CosmicEssence chapter 15 . 3/5/2013
oooh cool, nice set of episodes there, very enjoyable. Suppose you've stopped it here as we're about to lose Jack (for a little while I hope? not too long?) and I admit to being both worried nd excited to seeing you take on GITF considering how similar yet different SR was. Also liked you alluding to the real series in places, like Jack being left by the Doctor say. I take it Jack's 'immortality' is the same as in the series and we've just not come across it yet? Though also curious about Bad Wolf and Rose, I mean given the way this story is going it seems to me that Rose can't be normal human with normal lifespan issues no more...
| ariyana.lenae chapter 15 . 1/24/2013
LOVE THIS STORY! Not too much longer til some fluff right? :P
| Pig-Rabbit-Suk chapter 15 . 11/11/2012
Not crying. Nope, not at all.
| Clever Lass chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
You have a good start to a story here. Unfortunately, it was too confusing to hold my attention for long, because of the way you spaced and punctuated the dialogue. Each new speaker should get a new paragraph, and each line of dialogue should be punctuated just like any other sentence (and the punctuation goes inside the end-quotes). The way you wrote it was too difficult to figure out who was saying which line, especially when you have two speakers not only in the same paragraph, but even in the same line.
I recommend a beta-reader for this, because it sounds as if it could be a good story if you just fixed the mechanical errors in it. Unfortunately, those errors put me off enough so I couldn't read past this chapter. Don't stop writing, though! You have some good ideas! You just need to learn how to express them so the errors don't keep distracting the reader.