Reviews for The Fall of Naruto chapter 12 . 8/20/2010
hey great story hope you continue it its very good! and currently if left unfinished has a very sad and empty end (
BookLovinWorm chapter 12 . 7/13/2010
I'm just wondering, are you going to update your fic? I just have to say it's a really good story, grammar mistakes are minimal, and it's just plain awesome. Very original, too. :)
ILoveCocoaCookies chapter 12 . 12/8/2009
con. this plz
Lfan8 chapter 12 . 9/24/2009
Great chapter! please update soon
Lfan8 chapter 5 . 9/24/2009
wow...this chapter was pretty cool. It sucks though that everybody seems to be missing the fact that Naruto had just saved Konoha from an even bigger threat that Orochimaru. Since Konoha doesn't have the Kyuubi anymore Akatsuki is no longer a direct threat. And since the Kyuubi is now with Orochimaru...who is Akatsuki gonna attack next? XD
Lfan8 chapter 2 . 9/24/2009
This story looks pretty good so far. There were a few mistakes that I noticed though...the first one was that a cloud nin shouldn't be able to make kage bunshins. I'm no completely sure but I think kage bunshin was Konoka's secret technique. It's possible that it was stolen but I think Kakashi would have acted much more suprised if that was so. Also the Body-flicker technique that the other cloud nin used was not the technique that Yondaime was known for. I think Yondaime's technique was called the flying thunder-god or something like that and couldn't be used by anyone else but him...It was also much more there's a huge difference there. Ok...I'm gonna read on now :)
Blood Seraph chapter 12 . 9/20/2009
Well well well, finally an update, huh? lol, I'm not much better in that department. Although, Hidan literally IS immortal, while even Sasuke, even using the Kyuubi's chakra, is mortal, lol. Hidan wins, only way to beat him is to rip of his head pretty much, so that his body can't move. Even that can be fixed with some patching, lol. Hm, Ino wants to talk, huh? ALSO, I must say this, Kakashi, although he is weakened at the moment, is that much weaker than Orochimaru. Especially with the Mangekyou. Hm, not much else I can say except please update sooner. Nice chapter, too! lol
Blood Seraph chapter 2 . 9/19/2009
Hm, now that I'm rereading this, I have to say one thing. FIRST OFF! It's not Shunshin, that was the Yondaime's technique, it was the Hiraishin. And that technique requires not only a seal, but it was only KNOWN by the Yondaime, I'm sorry, it's a little late, but it always irritates me when people use the wrong technique, and say somebody else knows it. It was an impossibly complex technique that not anyone could master. Just thought I'd say that. Shunshin is just using chakra to accelerate the movement of one's body.
dreamlifter chapter 12 . 9/18/2009
very happy to see the story continue.

great action scenes. orochimaru and akatsuki are much more villianous here. one thing though...where's naruto?
dreamlifter chapter 11 . 9/18/2009
wow...intense! surprises keep on comming. great chapter
uzukun7 chapter 12 . 9/17/2009
well i am glad you have decided to grace us with a brand new chapter. this story is just too good to be thrown away. i guess konoha really has very little hope in defeating the enemies it faces. i wonder if naruto is even aware of all of the different problems that are going on around him. i hope you decide to update sooner than last time. laterz
watchingtherain1 chapter 12 . 9/17/2009
this is an interesting story. Look forward to future updates!
Rise Against713 chapter 12 . 9/17/2009
good to see an update. i like the cliff that may never be resolved. jk.

anyway awesome chapter
ferahgo89 chapter 6 . 9/17/2009
This story is very well written, but I'm afraid I can't read it anymore. It states in Naruto that demon chakra is toxic to humans, and one needs to grow up with constant contact with said chakra to be immune to it. You can't just go dump it in another person. They would have no tolerance to the demon chakra, and they would die. Also, it states that once a demon is in someone, it can't be extracted without killing the container.

These are the reasons I can no longer read your story, and I hope you don't take offence.

Valkarious chapter 12 . 9/17/2009
Looking foward to reading more keep up the good work and update when ya can!
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