Sweet... i Love It

some grammar error... but... hell good Fic you got here O_o...}

Heck Yeah

Aww! I love it!

Aww. That was pretty depressing, but cute. More and more of these femmeslash stories are popping up here. Well, mainly thanx to Lily's Garden. Þ Anyway! Besides a few gramm. errors, overall it was a pretty good story. _~

Quite a few grammar mistakes (mainly with as wiht). And the format's a bit odd, but I suppose it suits the story. Other than that: I liked it.