|Reviews for The Curse of Immortality|
| Kaito Hatake Uchiha chapter 23 . 11/24
Kaito is hungry want to eat
| Guest chapter 22 . 2/27
I have read this story YEARS ago.
I must say it was hard for me, being young , I had a hard time processing the "immortal" and "Live happy" part. But 13 years laters I still remember your story Cheska. An amazing art of work - I am happy that I was able to find it again
| Towairaito chapter 13 . 10/9/2008
I have to admit, this story has lots of potential. I like how the story line is going, but I'm really sorry to say I've only read it halfway through. I've lost interest in the story, not because of the storyline, but how the characters are OCC. Things that have already been said are repeated, and some parts are kept too short or too long. I'd like to be engaged in my reading and I do love your stories, but they really need to be reviewed more often. You're storylines are great! I love how they twist in some places, but other times I want to cringe because it's so predictable. It wouldn't hurt to add a little detail here and there as well, it would create a nicer picture to the reader's mind. But you don't have to take all of this on my account. I'm just being opinionated. But if you do need help, I can be of assistance. Once again, great story.
| dude chapter 11 . 11/21/2006
Spaces, Spaces, and SPACES. Did I mention spaces?
| serendpity 1 chapter 15 . 11/18/2006
SAILOR MOON PRINCESS SERENITY OR NEO QUEEN SERENITY MUST SHOW THEMSELVES! I ALSO WANTTHERE TO BE KISSING BETWEEN HIIRO AND SERENA OR USAGI! ONEGI!GOOD STORY SO FAR! JA NE!
| serendipty 1 chapter 23 . 11/17/2006
WHY DID YOU DO THAT BAKA! USAGI AND HIIRO WERE SO GOOD TOGETHER AND YOU LET HER DIE! SCREW YOU BAKA! BUT THAT WAS AN INTERESTING STORY THOUGH. JA NE!
| Dark Angel Shadow chapter 23 . 11/13/2005
hat was beautiful OMG i loved it
| DeLa Lune chapter 23 . 8/3/2004
this is was really good. im glad you wrote it.
| jex chapter 23 . 7/15/2004
| whitney5678 chapter 23 . 7/5/2004
that was sad it almost made me cry.
| Ceps chapter 23 . 7/12/2003
I have to agree. That DID suck.
| Hopeful Artimas chapter 23 . 4/18/2003
| LadyStarlight chapter 23 . 10/23/2002
My God, good story...you will make a sequal. The song that you used at the end of the story fit perfectly, go you! Congrats on your success!
| Enigma chapter 1 . 4/6/2002
I just want u 2 know...this story is reeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaally sad in the end. Quite a tear jerker...well 4 me it was. Newayz, this story is very interesting, on the contrary, I actually find it enjoyable. Keep up the good work! And pat urself on the back, u have earned it. Job well done
| tsumaki-chan chapter 23 . 1/23/2002
kami-sama...that's so sad...but a really good story