Reviews for A Life In Salem
Oh the horror chapter 34 . 7/31/2012
Not to sound like a flamer, but I'd say the wisest thing for you to do is stop writing. Your story is one ungodly mess, it's in script format (which is against the site rules), you've got a song included in it (against site rules), you've disregarded all English rules (also against site policy), and you're stories are all nothing but annoying self-insert Marysue crap in which you plunk yourself, your boyfriend, and all your friends into whatever poor innocent fandom you decide to trash with your garbage. Take a good look, only your friends are the ones reviewing, everyone else is leaving you criticism, so that should tell you that you're not a writer AT ALL. And your story has been reported to the site for all the flagrant violations and crimes committed in just this chapter alone.
Nosferatu chapter 33 . 10/20/2011
I am so confused. There are two characters named Hope? I could swear that in one of the earlier chapters you said that Kendall was Ron and Jackie's first child, so where did those two older daughters come from? And how old does that make Jackie if she has adult children? I thought she turned thirty-something in one of the early chapters, on their wedding day.
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 17 . 8/3/2007
aw pretty song...
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 16 . 7/26/2007
aw i hope its a girl
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 15 . 7/19/2007
aw *tear*
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 14 . 7/2/2007
aw ME ND RICHARD SITTIN IN A TREE...u know the rest _
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 13 . 6/19/2007
aw *tear* no one sprays jackie nd puts her in the corner!
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 12 . 6/11/2007
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 10 . 6/10/2007
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 11 . 6/10/2007
aw thats such a cute widdle name
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 9 . 6/1/2007
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 8 . 5/23/2007
Joe got his ass handed to him! YEA!
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 7 . 3/31/2007
wait...I got shot? HE GOT SHOT! omg...what...nvm,lol
Tre Psycho Vamp chapter 6 . 3/28/2007
rosyrose chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
This story makes no sense at all.
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