Reviews for Ramble On |
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PinVerified chapter 8 . 3/7/2007 really enjoyed reading this. well paced, excellent plot. big thumbs up! |
aithreachas chapter 8 . 3/4/2007 I know from reading a majority of the wonderful reviews you have received that some have managed to pick a favorite from your stories. I, for one, cannot. Possible appropriate metaphors should spring to mind as to ow that would be impossible, but suffice it to say that all of your tales are well done...extremely well done...and will be read and re-read as long as fanfiction is around...of this I am sure. |
AquarianNightSky chapter 8 . 2/25/2007 Really good story. Well written, well developed. Um... I can't think of anything else to say. I'm going to read your other stories now. :-) Toodles! Sky |
chituhr chapter 8 . 2/19/2007 Wow! You captured the chemistry between the brothers perfectly. This story was truly amazing. Between the flashbacks (which were perfectly placed) and the current story you painted a beautiful picture of how the brothers show their love towards each other. Keep up the great writing! This was a magnificent piece! |
ThornGryphon chapter 1 . 2/12/2007 who says: When a hunt goes SIDEWAYS? |
heather03nmg chapter 8 . 1/31/2007 Wow, that story was amazing. I am new to the world of fanfics but your story has been the best by far. You captured the love of the brothers perfectly...it was sweet and touching without being over the top. Thank you very sharing it with us! |
Swanseajill chapter 8 . 1/29/2007 I made a big mistake with this story. I planned to send FB at the end, but I loved it so much that I wanted to Fb to each part and then I didn't get to it so I sent nothing at all! So one post like this to sum it up is really a bit of an insult because it deserves so much more. I totally adored it from beginning to end. I think it's my favourite of your three stories. It has the least involved storyline, but the way you portrayed their relationship, and particularly Dean's devotion to Sam against all the odds, was awesome. I thought the flashbacks worked well too, fleshing out what was going through their minds. It was totally stunning and I plan to go back and read it again and again. I do so hope you have another story in the works. Do you post at LJ? if not, you should, because I'm sure there's a whole crowd of people there who'd love your stories. Next time, I'll post FB to each chapter as it comes - I've learnt my lesson! |
EFW chapter 4 . 1/25/2007 I know I've reviewed parts of this story before, but I was rereading it, because I needed a fix, and just had to comment on how wonderful it is. The total trust the brothers have for each other, the way you portray them, is just great. I loved this line: “I’m sorry I couldn’t get you out of this, man,” he whispered. And I loved it because it is selfless Dean at his most moving. He can barely move a muscle, he is so badly hurt himself, and his disappointment with himself is palpable. Great job. |
Rebel Goddess chapter 8 . 1/16/2007 Chapter 7's revelation was too good to stop at. I rarely say this but I don't want this story to be stretched out, as much as I enjoy it. It needed to end here because more would make it too long and too involved. Wonderful ending. I especially liked the brothers' parallel stories. |
Rebel Goddess chapter 4 . 1/16/2007 My heart nearly stopped when Dean thought he heard his father's voice. Wonderful chapter. I loved it. Gorgeous use of flashbacks / past scenes too. |
pnuts100 chapter 1 . 1/8/2007 I really,really loved this story..loved the other ones to but this one was super(im not a big fan of adding love interests to the storys)Love the way you write the brothers and all the agest...cant wait for the next one from up the great work. |
Sunflower Angel chapter 8 . 1/6/2007 Wow! You held my attention until the very end. This is one of the best "Supernatural" fics I've ever read. You were able to capture both Sam and Dean's characters perfectly. I loved the flashbacks; they added more insight and depth into the characters that we've already grown to love. There was only one problem with a description of one of your characters (and I'm just being nitpicky here) - Sam's/Jared's eyes are not brown in real life - but hey, it's your story so you have the right to describe the characters however you want. Kudos to you for writing such an exciting, moving story between the two brothers! I look forward to reading your next! |
TraSan chapter 1 . 1/1/2007 I'll admit, I've already submitted a review for this story. However, I didn't know how else to put you on my author alert list! And really, can you really tire of hearing how great your story was? (c: I enjoy all your fics. |
Dragonflysoul chapter 8 . 1/1/2007 Oh, this was just *stands and applauds* FANTASTIC! I ate up every word! And the ending... PERFECT! Thank you SO MUCH for this! |
pandora jazz chapter 8 . 12/31/2006 A little late in sending my review, sorry about that, but I did want to say thanks. I really enjoyed your story, "Ramble On." I did try to read your other two so I could understand some of the flashbacks, but this one is my favorite. I loved how you started the story, the action and brothers. No building up to the wendigo's encounter, the brothers were there and the fight had started. You captured Dean and Sam characters perfectly, I could picture Jensen :) and Jared in the roles, just another "Supernatural" episode. Thanks for having this take place in the first season, (which had no bad episodes or new characters like the second), the brothers are talking, even if Dean still has trouble saying how he feels. The different flashbacks you used were very nice, there were only a couple that I didn't understand, that is why I tried to read your other stories. I enjoyed your OC characters, Abe, Running Horse and Doc. I liked the chapter where Abe was helping the brothers out of the woods and Dean thought their father was there. It was sad when Sam had to tell Dean that their father had not come to find them. I liked the pace of your story and the last couple of chapters as they dealt with Dean's infection were very intense. When Dean asked Sam "Don't let him fall", very emotional. I also liked Abe's line about how they are more than siblings, they are partners and friends. The only line I questioned, because it was depressing to me was from Running Horse when he told Sam "One day he will destroy himself to save you. It is the blessing and curse of brothers." I had found your story around chapter six and tried to play catch up, so should of reviewed sooner, but truthfully wanted to know if I was going to like the ending, since I wasn't familiar with your writing. I admit, it is a fault of mine, I've been surprised in the past by some stories (I won't/can't read death fiction) so I have my list of authors and don't take chances on different writers, but I'm working on it. I really enjoyed this story and will definitely read it again. Thanks for sharing your story with us. Happy New Year! |